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Written: February 08, 2024 ________________________________________ Scarlet lips susurrous softly, amid quiescence of dusk bequeath beamily beguin beats within our sumptuous souls. As grace echoes in crimson, tears trickle toward titillating face vital words are shared in embrace, eliciting a warm scintilla that crams, my heart to the brim, our euphoria shall shut out the world Such are your lovely virtues, scarlet swing, swirl, and splendor, mellifluous plea of my heartbeat. Perhaps this flesh is gossamer, wrapped around wintry bones, until I hear the timbre of your voice. We should meet at dusk, as the sunshine is waning. Daffodils light up my mane, peppery sanguine sepals. lusting lyrics lost like lines Join me at dusk, softly swinging across stardust lips of weary soul, singing in embers drawn down dunes deter We should meet at dusk, as our skin melts into night linen, and we sit beneath the moonlight, not requiring any words, floating on seahorses, amid sapphire blue waves, and waltzing to sea-angel moans. We should meet at dusk, to show me your soft hands, wrap me in rose petals, slow-burning summer opening. We should meet at dusk, with quartz amethysts cravings for whispers of the future, while never departing. I shall wrap my ribs around yours, sustained and pianissimo. kindly apply your fingertips, and tiptoe down my spine. We should meet at dusk, and, well, simply kiss me, throw me a steamy embrace, will fade into wildflower shades. we whisper as silence draws, shy, pink, fizzy, sizzling apple spirits. I retain a nightly tally, hours on given days amidst the quiet murk of waiting you embody my soul. I almost lost faith soaking in a velvety eclipse, years flew by lacking your love, which goes hollow until you smile. I attempted to forget, the curves of your body, and sweat-formed salt puddles, dewing on the warm golden dome, those were milestone spots of mutual delight. Kisses resemble seaports. such a visceral map to feel that plagues my dreams. Years of seclusion occurred, erosion-prone, and sallow a memory-bound state, that yearns solely for, your trustworthy love.

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Date: 2/20/2024 8:52:00 AM
Desire and true love exude from your passionate words. Such a well deserved 1st place win. Your pinnacle of adoration, kept me spellbound. Such immense emotion, poured from your poem as it melted into night linen. Congratulations dear friend. I was enthralled with this masterpiece. .. Wen
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:29:00 AM
Dear Sotto, this is so emotive and so heartfelt and passionately moving, i love the metaphors, and use of various poetic techniques here such as alliterations to enhance the beauty and depth of emotions flowing within these well articulated lines. I love how descriptive it is and how youv painted imagery and used nature to express here! What a romantic poem this is! I loved the seamless flow too! Impeccable write! Especially the ending was touching! Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/10/2024 11:20:00 AM
Your poem captures the essence of longing, desire, and the ineffable beauty of human connection, particularly in the twilight moments of dusk... Throughout the poem, there's a delicate interplay between light and darkness, echoed in phrases like "quiescence of dusk" and "sunshine is waning." Dusk becomes a metaphor for the fleeting nature of love and the transience of human experience, where moments of connection are cherished against the backdrop of encroaching night. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/10/2024 10:58:00 AM
- You describe this with "capital letters", Las ... the wording/ lines that impress greatly - "our euphoria shall shut out the world ... our skin melts into night linen ... I shall wrap my ribs around yours (+ ++)" - A masterpiece, my friend :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 2/9/2024 11:16:00 PM
"We should meet at dusk, as our skin melts into night linen, and we sit beneath the moonlight, not requiring any words, floating on seahorses, amid sapphire blue waves". So heartwarming, so romantic and so beautiful......! This sensuous poem has some amorous and intimate details. "I attempted to forget, the curves of your body, and sweat-formed salt puddles, dewing on the warm golden dome". I am sure this is for a contest and feel this will get a top placement....
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Valsa George
Date: 2/9/2024 11:18:00 PM
Have been away for two days traveling. Sorry for the delayed response.
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Valsa George
Date: 2/9/2024 11:18:00 PM
Have been away for two days traveling. Sorry for the delayed response.
Date: 2/9/2024 1:24:00 PM
A fav of mine, SOTTO! This whole poem was amazing, so dear- I can't believe your sensitivity. I will always measure love poems by such poems as this. BREATHTAKING WRITING.
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Date: 2/9/2024 11:39:00 AM
Great use of alliteration combines this poem into a brilliant romance. Passion, emotion and imagery excel.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/11/2024 3:16:00 AM
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Date: 2/9/2024 7:07:00 AM
Delightfully romantic poem, my friend. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem reminiscing in love, Lasaad. Your words of passion reverberate throughout.
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Date: 2/9/2024 5:24:00 AM
Oh my Lasaad …you truly have a gift of tugging at the heart strings my friend! Another magnificent write of words of a longing love with beautiful imagery! Debx
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Date: 2/8/2024 9:17:00 PM
This is a very well written love poem. I would warn her to be wary, but she will fall head over heels. Poem melts like chocolate.
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Date: 2/8/2024 7:59:00 PM
Dear Sotto, This is an exquisite poem with the threads of longing, passion, and the tender anticipation of love's embrace. Each line is like a delicate brushstroke painting landscape of emotions swirling in the twilight of desire. Your words evoke a sense of desire and intimacy that reaches deeply within the heart. For me this was an amazing lyrical journey into the depths of love's mysteries. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/8/2024 5:59:00 PM
dearest Sotto-Your poem is one of the loveliest I've read in quite some time. I was spellbound reading it, for it's filled with line after line of exquisite imagery that evoked a range of emotions--remorse and sadness from erosion-prone secluded years to a passionate yearning. (We should meet at dusk...and yearns solely for your trustworthy love) Every word and every line is like a delicate brush stroke on your poetic canvas! Outstanding love poem! Breathless! your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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