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Love-Making In the Wild

Alone I roam the dreamland wood sombre and empty, dark my mood vain hope to meet my love denied a throbbing, pumping ache inside afar a gleaming stream of blue: mauve, purple, lilac mixed in hue ‘longside the one in dreams is mine soft hazel eyes and features fine He becks me close with comely smile trance-like I float what seems a mile a fragrant sweet around unfolds a wondrous sight my eye beholds: a bed of jasmine, handpicked all my loved one smiles with look enthralled He tweaks my nose with twinkling eye within and –out I’m set afire he mouths the words our eyes portray lights fiery love long kept at bay swept off our feet and smitten deep entranced our eyes with want to keep We make sweet love, as lovers do declare our love, sincere and true on bed of jasmine hands roam free scent mingles with heart’s melody both hearts in tandem skip a beat then pick up pace in lustful heat pulsating passion multiplies we merge as one with moans and sighs....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/9/2013 3:37:00 PM
Great use of meter & alliteration. Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:49:00 PM
Delysia, love the win............. LUV.............. SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:13:00 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Delysia.- Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:09:00 PM
A very nice and lovely win... Linda
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:10:00 PM
You have a turn of pen Licia that produces such great emotion and mind pictures, your descriptive powers are truly amazing. This is a superb example. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/31/2013 5:44:00 PM
wow...I remember reading this poem .... it's exciting... thanks... Linda
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Date: 5/11/2013 5:49:00 PM
Makes a guy want to go walking in the wodds! Very sensual and tastefuly erotic.
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Date: 4/12/2013 4:42:00 AM
WOW! How absolutely thrilling! Great write, my dear...on such a lovely topic! :) Glad I chose this one to feast on! Hugs!
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Date: 7/6/2011 10:20:00 PM
Hey, I can't find one of yours I haven't read yet. CAn you think of one to point me toward. I ended up on your jungle love poem again. haha. It's a golden oldie of yours now! Go ahead and post the new one!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:15:00 AM
Romance written with such talent.
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:29:00 AM
Hey there Delysia, absolutely loved this walk on the wild side ;) love the flow of it as well. Hope your are doing okay hun, enjoy what is left of the week :)tc
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:54:00 PM
Yesss, i remember the good times, and i'm not alone, just as you describe , babe you has me going, a picture keeps a flowing. love it xo Don
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Date: 6/2/2011 11:45:00 PM
Ooooh, jungle love!!! NICE!
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:34:00 AM
Lovely story, lovely rhymes, subject treated carefully to spare our blushes, brilliant (and congrats too).
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Delysia. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:28:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:41:00 PM
Super congrats on your awesome win with this poem that flowed wonderfully and sweetly, Delysia :) Enjoyed the read :)
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:29:00 PM
D. hendricks!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:11:00 PM
Many congrats : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, delysia
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:58:00 PM
way to go delysia on another fantastic win in this contest.. oh please enjoy for excellent entry luv... and thankxx for your sweet comments to me ..luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:39:00 PM
Nice poem on sweet love. Congrats Delysia on your win,,love,gautami
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:38:00 AM
Sensuously beautiful!!Congrats on your HM.
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on this HM. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:38:00 AM
Very passionate, Delysia! Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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