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Love Letters

"love letters" as time moves I wonder my love letter to you enveloped with a waltz and breathtaking ballad it would reveal all telling the story of us only for your promised heart to follow along unveiled with everlasting slow dances for two you eternally captured me since the dawning setting tones for love letters waltzing through still I wonder such whispers from you to me yielding my heart as only your desire can unleashed and uncovered with love's umbrella opening the dance floor of all renditions inviting emotions to softly surface and hold enchanting secrets revealing how you feel among leaving your scent identified through evermore our written words reach the sky allowing such sentiments to gently sway SkyWatcher 11-01-23

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Daniel Turner

Date: 11/6/2023 6:09:00 PM

I like this one! I hope all is well with you, Lisa. Sorry I havent been around much. Life gets in the way sometimes. Hope to see you writing again soon.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:27:00 AM

Good Morning Mr. Daniel. Hi. What a nice surprise. Thank you ever so much for visiting my page and entry because I understand life is busy for you also. I too come and go and remain inconsistent with being active with reviewing unfortunately. Yes, life does get in the way and it comes before poetry sad to say. I'm sorry for this late response and I will certainly look to see you you posted anything new. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again Daniel for stopping by for I do not take that for granted. Blessings and Peace always (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/3/2023 4:55:00 PM

I liked the closing lings indicating that even your written words were waltzing in the sky. that brings a smile to my face, Lisa. Your poetry is so gentle it makes me want to just hold it close and hug it. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:22:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. You have me smiling with your generous and beautiful commentary. Truly. It is a great way to start the day. I'm so sorry for this late response. I am honored with your commentary to which I am thankful that you shared your intake. That is a plus for me. May you and Sara have a beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings now and always to you. I will see you soon on your page. And yes, may all know of love. (smile) Thank you Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/1/2023 3:46:00 PM

love letters waltzing was a beautiful line, Lisa! This is an exceptional love poem, graceful at every line. You have a special poetic heart and spirit, Lisa. Glad our paths crossed. Hugs from Bill & I!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:17:00 AM

Hello Miss Sara. Good Morning. First allow me to echo your words of paths crossing. Yes. Second it is my hope that my work and entry here deserve your generosity and commentary. Truly. Never do I take anything for granted including you. Where would we be without love. Nowhere... Have a beautiful morning and day. May it show you and Bill everything good. With hugs back to you along with Peace and Blessings I will see you soon on your page. (smile) Thank you Sara and I am sorry for this late response.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/1/2023 5:18:00 AM

This flows like a breath of fresh air, so soothingly poetic and flawless! Absolutely love how you’ve woven words too in such a beautiful manner: so much depth in your words and so many emotions and thoughts you’ve phrased and articulated in such eloquence: i really love the line “ unleashed and uncovered with love's umbrella” wow! And that ending! You truly have a way with words! And this is no exception! Im so pleased to be able to read poems like this! You’ve done an exquisite job! Another fav

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:12:00 AM

Good Morning Ink Empress. Hello. I am beyond honored and humbled. Truly. Thank you ever so much for such generosity. I know saying thank you is pale however thank you. Have a beautiful morning and day. I will see you soon on your page. I'm so sorry for this late response. Blessings always. (smile)