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Love Letter

I will never forget our very first mating ritual,
some swans species are done in seconds . . .
but ours went on for over an  H O U R   !
    Oh, the courtship dance was divine
        and  s u b l i m e .
For days and days we touched wings while drifting,
    on the smooth water
and wasn't it lovely to preen together . . . 
        we dipped our beaks over and  OVER,
I loved when you would just be still and watch me.
Our bodies touched smooth and  g r a c e f u l ,
                 we never took our eyes off each other.
Soon our necks were intertwining (I loved that part).
    and while we paddled our  WI N G S  spread
                 and you took me to the stars . . . 
at one point you even pushed my head under the water, dear!
                         you make very  s e x y  snorts and groans.
And from that day we have been as one,
  in perfect  H A R M O N Y ,
and together we raised all those fluffy cygnets.
                             You are so protective to all our little ones,
     don't you just love the first time they go for a swim.
With you as our HERO our family plays and sleeps  in safety always,
           thank you for being the best  m a t e  for life
                            and a great father . . . 

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November 3, 2017

Poetry/Free Verse/Love Letter
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9560-07-0
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Written for the contest, Love Letter
sponsor, Viv Wigley

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Very sweet one, Constance: Congratulations for your love story. Hugs, SuZ
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Lovely :) soft spot for swans here... Congratulations! xomo <3
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:55 PM
such a sweet poem Constance congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Congrats, Constance, on a lovely piece, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
Nusker Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:06 AM
Such a cute poem so beautifully written, B.W. Congratulations on your win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Congratulations, BW on your win.
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Nicely written BW. I love swans. I may have mentioned before, the city of Lakeland near me is known as the city of swans. On one of the small lakes I watched a pair of black swans creating a perfect heart just like in your photo.
Beaufort Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Birds are very special creatures. You have a very empathetic and passionate soul.
Manassian Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:52 AM
lovely romance of these beautiful creatures, dear. Good luck in the contest. I love how you gave the female swan a voice. ;)
Smith Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Lovely entry BW, my very best wishes in the contest...
Sivey Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 5:20 AM
This is beautifully written my friend! I surely loved the way you had the swans mating for life, such a romantic gesture too! your poem has such passion all throughout it, I loved reading it this fine morning! Great Work!!
Ashley Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:20 PM
A beautifully written love letter Broken Wings. Creative and enchanting. Good luck in the contest!
Sands Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 4:45 PM
I love this sweet poem. I hope it does well in the contest! Very well written :)
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 4:32 PM
A story so cute, and so is the letter--best for a win, BW!
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