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I will never forget our very first mating ritual, some swans species are done in seconds . . . but ours went on for over an H O U R ! Oh, the courtship dance was divine and s u b l i m e . For days and days we touched wings while drifting, on the smooth water and wasn't it lovely to preen together . . . we dipped our beaks over and OVER, I loved when you would just be still and watch me. Our bodies touched smooth and g r a c e f u l , we never took our eyes off each other. Soon our necks were intertwining (I loved that part). and while we paddled our WI N G S spread and you took me to the stars . . . at one point you even pushed my head under the water, dear! you make very s e x y snorts and groans. And from that day we have been as one, in perfect H A R M O N Y , and together we raised all those fluffy cygnets. You are so protective to all our little ones, don't you just love the first time they go for a swim. With you as our HERO our family plays and sleeps in safety always, thank you for being the best m a t e for life and a great father . . . _________________________ November 3, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Love Letter Copyright Protected, ID 17-9560-07-0 All Rights Reserved. Written for the contest, Love Letter sponsor, Viv Wigley Fourth Place

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Date: 11/15/2017 8:42:00 AM
Very sweet one, Constance: Congratulations for your love story. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/13/2017 7:36:00 PM
Lovely :) soft spot for swans here... Congratulations! xomo <3
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:55:00 PM
such a sweet poem Constance congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:29:00 AM
Congrats, Constance, on a lovely piece, and thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
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Date: 11/13/2017 1:06:00 AM
Such a cute poem so beautifully written, B.W. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations, BW on your win.
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Date: 11/9/2017 6:56:00 AM
Nicely written BW. I love swans. I may have mentioned before, the city of Lakeland near me is known as the city of swans. On one of the small lakes I watched a pair of black swans creating a perfect heart just like in your photo.
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Date: 11/4/2017 2:41:00 PM
Birds are very special creatures. You have a very empathetic and passionate soul.
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:52:00 AM
lovely romance of these beautiful creatures, dear. Good luck in the contest. I love how you gave the female swan a voice. ;)
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Date: 11/4/2017 9:55:00 AM
Lovely entry BW, my very best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:20:00 AM
This is beautifully written my friend! I surely loved the way you had the swans mating for life, such a romantic gesture too! your poem has such passion all throughout it, I loved reading it this fine morning! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:20:00 PM
A beautifully written love letter Broken Wings. Creative and enchanting. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/3/2017 4:45:00 PM
I love this sweet poem. I hope it does well in the contest! Very well written :)
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Date: 11/3/2017 4:32:00 PM
A story so cute, and so is the letter--best for a win, BW!
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