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Love Laced

This is a dangerous man. Seduction‘s tendrils lace thumbs at collarbone, his digits wind round behind. Manicured, long, clean…fingers, made for face tracery, pulling back shoulders and raising crest-capped peaks. Thumbs at collarbone, his digits wind round behind. Soft, full, Latin lips nibble the pulse racing at neck, pulling back shoulders and raising crest capped peaks, manicured long clean…fingers made for tracery. Soft, full, Latin lips nibble the pulse racing at neck. The kiss repeats with nips and pulls to bottom lip. Manicured long clean…fingers made for tracery, the return voyage of his mouth brushes half closed lids. The kiss repeats with nips and pulls to bottom lip. Stasis without, riling within, rose-crests scratch across cloth. The return voyage of his mouth brushes half-closed lids. Enough, relent, leave off, the fainting feeling, so intense. Stasis without, riling within, rose-crests scratch across cloth. Push, push, his barrel chest, the salt and pepper curls. Enough, relent, leave off, the fainting feeling, so intense. Bodies have not met, yet, this momentary bliss is not without regret. Push, push, his barrel chest, the salt and pepper curls. Blood like rainwater drains to nether regions of pain. Ours bodies have not met, yet, momentary bliss without regret. Like chocolate ice cream with chocolate chips and sauce, A whipped cream delight of potential deadly sorrow, Manicured long clean…..fingers made for face tracery, God!….exited my lips, as they left his. This is a dangerous man. Seduction‘s tendrils lace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
Debbie, Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win on this lovely Valentines poem my dear friend, Deb! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/10/2013 8:37:00 PM
congrats :-) SandyIvy
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:16:00 AM
holy crap. you are amazing. congrats yourself!! flippin awesome talent you are lady!! xoxoxo
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Date: 6/2/2010 1:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, especially with this very difficult form on a sensual subject. Dan C
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:03:00 PM
Deborah, Great job with this difficult form, congratulation on your success in the contest, YF4L, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations Deb. A marvelous description of your given theme. I enjoyed reading...Margaret
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Constance's conrtest with this great write... just go back from my eye surgery and am allowed on comp for one hour and then rest .. other eye next week.. rough go of it.. the traveling alone stresses one out.. but I made it back in one piece ..or should I say ..one piece minus unhealed eyeball..happy to see I won a few since last night too... luv.. pupil..
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:27:00 PM
This was ...just a KISS............LOL...no sex...a kiss
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:25:00 AM
deb, was reading the comments below and that just got me confused. To me this was just good sex, right? hahaha. Lucky lady to have had all these men which you combined into this one fine sexy dude! Some of the lines in your pantoum were quite stunning, the return voyage of his mouth. . that was one of them I loved! I think this deserved a win! LUv, Andrea ps. SOUPMAIL, urgent
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:58:00 AM
Just so you know LOL no 1 man was this but a combination of 1st and last loves..........
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:27:00 AM
Fantastic write, Deborah! So well done Pantoum! Enjoyed reading every line..Gert
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Date: 5/11/2010 12:31:00 AM
you have an extraordinary brain... so articulate... yet easy to read and comprehend... and the array of variety... fantastic! i love poetry, though i have to admit im not sure of all the different kinds, i really enjoy getting that insight into peoples minds and life... exspecially the ones i can relate to ;) great work <3
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:26:00 PM
Oh! you made first smile and then laugh till I reached the last line
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Date: 5/10/2010 2:04:00 PM
HOt HOt HOt OMG this is a good one for the contest... hope Catie does not faint from your great lines and like chocolate ice cream.. yum with chocolate chips yummer still... good luck in the contest... SOUP MAIL
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:18:00 PM
This is what I mean in the forum! By reading your great poem I learned a new form of poetry. (Of course, I know your work so I thank you for creating real poetry :) Love, Iolanda
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:16:00 PM
Deb, A Pantoum is never easy to write and you have written a brilliant one! Your words exalt the unbridled passionate anticipation with verve and sway and as I understand your meaning here, it has nothing to do with religion. Outstanding! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:49:00 AM
Love the way you express your, Deadly Seduction towards the passion within God. Lovely differ. write from you D.G. I truly did enjoy the passion you shared with us. My kinda read even if you added God in it. That is why it is a very tasty write. Sorry that is the way i will describe it. I also want to add I am doing well On my ( I ) No need to sale my self short. Hope you had a wonderful Mothers day,..p.d
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