Love Knot - Formerly Titled 'Indian Hit'
LOVE KNOT?
There once was a girl who was smitten,
On a guy she always was hittin’.
He threw her a rope,
Which gave her some hope,
Until she saw how it was fittin’.
[Just a few changes -- new title, two changed words. Makes all the difference, doesn't it?]
Copyright © Deb Radke | Year Posted 2010
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