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Love Kiss

Tropical, exotic, new to the night, 
The beautiful creature arrives,
Delicately velvet showing all that she is, 
Her exquisite wings opening wide,

As she flies through my heart tickling my yearn, 
Fluttering about with no care,
And dropping right down onto my head, 
Free falling with a gleam in the air,

And as she falls I notice her wings, 
Soft pink, soft music, soft smile,
Bubbling right down with a colourful soul, 
A soul both gentle and wild,

My floating flower comes to me every night, 
She floats right onto my lips,
With her heavenly wings and softest body, 
She gives me a beautiful kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 1:04 PM
"My floating flower comes to me every night, She floats right onto my lips. Mmm, so sweet and sexy. You certainly have a way with words. I like. ;) Brandy
Raynes Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Hi brandy, this was an attempt at erotica on this site. Thanks
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Hello Lewis, this sounds to me like this is an angel. have a nice day my friend.
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:51 AM
I’m so glad I discovered this gem of a poem! Loved the metaphor and expression, Lewis! A fave :)
Bangalee Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:07 AM
thrilling
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 10:11 PM
I love the whole poem, but "tickling my yearn" ...I'm drunk on that word pairing. Delicious soup! xomo ;)
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