Love Is Our Prize

Love Is Our Prize Love is our prize, for we are true, Thus beats my heart, so claim your eyes, When in unison two souls coo As night romantic blushes skies. How stars twinkle, moon glistens highs, When Venus grins, charming our view, While she affirms, as passions rise; Love is our prize, for we are true. For long it’s been, just me and you, Feeling blissful when dreams surmise: Our love's real, meant for just few; Thus beats my heart, so claim your eyes. We rejoice kinship love implies As fervid vibes of romance woo, While hearts echo our cheerful cries When in unison two souls coo. Sharing secrets, we barely knew, Grim past we shed held in disguise And moving forth, vows we renew, As night romantic blushes skies. Love genuine will not surprise, Hosting harmony, tuned anew, Ensuring souls strum as allies; When hearts synchronize, as we do, Love is our prize. March 23, 2023 Placed 1st: Double The Fun Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Eight syllables per line Rhymes: A1B1A2B2; babA1; abaB1; babA2; abaB2; babaR
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Buehler Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Indeed, life's most valuable prize is love. An enchanting poem! Belated congratulations.
George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Hearty Congratulations Vijay on your well deserved first place win.
May Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 11:42 AM
A most treasured prize, Wonderful write Vijay, Congrats on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day...............
Poet Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Back with congratulations your amply deserved win, dear friend.
Seeker Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 5:28 AM
Beautiful love poem, Vijay! I absolutely loved it! Warmest congratulations on your win
Proxenos Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 3:34 AM
What a dreamy romantic poem you most certainly are the master of Romantic poetry my friend and how I love them all . Great poetic artistry within this write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
George Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 1:46 AM
When two souls coo in unison and in perfect synchrony, it is nearer to heaven. As ever, you have extolled the power of love in your inimitable romantic style . All the Best, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:23 AM
So very kind of you Valsa. Much appreciate your presence my page and your glowing remarks. Many thanks.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Beautiful, Vijay, so romantic. Good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Oh, my closest and dearest friend Vijay, what a heartbreakingly beautiful composition this is! It is without a doubt something that hypnotizes each and every heart that has built equilibrium at its very foundation. You did a fantastic job. Good luck. This a fave for me. Be blessed!
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Thank you my friend for your insights and kind thoughts. Much appreciate your visit and your FAVE. You always spread cheer on Soup with your comments. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Vijay, only you can fashion such romantic lines! Love is indeed a prize to be cherished!!! A wonderful write! Happy Saturday!!
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 3:21 PM
Love is supreme. Many thanks Mike--appreciate your visit and comments, as always.
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. These don't look so easy to write but it seems you have done it perfectly. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Yes--it was no easy. Much appreciate your insights, Sara. Many thanks, as always.
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Fabulous writing Vijay. Love, romance, longevity. Just lovely. Best for the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 3:19 PM
You are very kind--many thanks, Linda.
Y. Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Wow! Vijay, This is excellent for the contest. It has a nice rhythm and flow. I found it very romantic as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Alexis. Many thanks.
M  Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:14 AM
What a magical poem of love Vijay worded so beautifully…..Debx
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:46 AM
I am delighted by your visit and comments, Deb. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Masterfully composed, Vijay--very romantic and descriptive. Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:44 AM
So nice to hear that from you, Janice. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 3:38 AM
You don't miss a beat of beauty here, I can hear the doves cooing in the love fields of harmony, :)
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Vienna. Always appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 8:52 PM
This is awesome, Vijay, fave:)
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:42 AM
So special to receive your FAVE, Jo. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 5:14 PM
You know it's true love, "when hearts synchronize." Once again, you've created a masterpiece, and your words of love are tied with a red bow. This is so beautiful and romantic. Simply breathtaking. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:42 AM
So very kind of you, my friend. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate your insights, Brandy. Many thanks.
Faulkner Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Very evocative of the night's romance and the gift of true love, best wishes for the contest~
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Glad to see you again, Michelle. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Chuuk Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Another beautiful romantic love poem my friend. What is a relationship without a true deep love. And certainly yours is a winning prize. Simply beautiful, and a magnificent poetry. And I’m very sure it’ll do great in the contest. :)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Much appreciate your kind remarks and your vote of confidence, my friend. Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Fin.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 10:38 AM
One cannot but agree that love when true, is the best gift in the world.
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Well said, Victor. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 9:26 AM
What a romantic symphony of love, my dearest friend, Vijay! It certainly mesmerizes every heart that harmony in its core has established. Excellently done. Good luck. Be blessed!
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Glad to hear that from you my friend. Always appreciate your visit and insights, Demetrios. Many thanks.
Turner Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:52 AM
A worthy prize at that. Well written, Vijay. I like the second verse the most:)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Yes--indeed, a worthy prize. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Daniel. Many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 7:40 AM
- Beautifully written ... the true love, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Glad to hear that, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.
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