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Love Is Immortal

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Unmask this night, let our love transpire A free and wondrous kiss with love's embrace Allow finger's passion to boldly trace As we enjoy our night dreams sweet desire To paint beautiful pictures to inspire The moon's soft glowing light will brush your face Treasured memories time will not erase In dim light of night our love will conspire We'll appease hunger with our mouth's consent With soft whispered words from love's craving song A warm breathless universe to explore Until time has slowed to capture its intent We'll drift away in worlds where we belong Two prisoners in love forevermore contest Form I 2/18/17 Italian Sonnet-ABBAABBA-CDECDE

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/21/2017 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations Frederick: A beautiful romantic sonnet I enjoedthe mood and flow of your words.

Constance La France

Date: 3/20/2017 3:13:00 PM

Frederic congratulations on your win in my contest. .I love the the image and audio~

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/1/2017 8:55:00 PM

That second stanza....so fulfilling and sweet. That kind of prison I'd never leave

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/21/2017 12:34:00 AM

A beautifully passionate sonnet, Frederic. I know this will do well in the contest! lots of luck and thanks for your visit today. I know what you mean about feeling invisible sometimes even around people who are supposed to know us. it's funny how we can feel most alone in a crowd and so what do we do? We write! That's where we shine...hugs to you, Rhonda

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/20/2017 9:59:00 PM

A lovely love immortal of a verse Frederic...a winner in my court... god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2017 7:39:00 PM

Awesome love sonnet, Frederic. A sure winner!!! I will either go Italian like you did or just plain iambic!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2017 12:40:00 PM

My kind of immortality!

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/18/2017 11:59:00 PM

A prison that most people desire to be a captive in! Nice work here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/18/2017 10:45:00 PM

Sometimes I am at a loss for words, just found this beautiful and loved the line "We'll appease hunger with our mouth's consent"

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/18/2017 9:53:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet on love's immortal quality, love the line, "We'll drift in worlds where we belong." Best, SuZ