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United Colours: Green
Sponsor: Silent One

Escape with me into tranquility, my sweet, 
relax with me inside your vitality and growth.
Lead me into your emerald world,
full of balance and harmony.
Of all the seas I've sailed, your chartreuse
island seems to be the most romantic destination.
The seaweed may create difficult tides,
but our perseverance out shines resistance.
For my yellow has mixed with your blue,
and our love created natural green, 
full of prosperity and abundance.
Our wall built from olive branches,
proceeds to block out anything
that would get in the way of our wealth.
Our four leaf shamrock, I hold in my 
locket, wearing it while I travel this
journey with you. Heal me with your moss, 
a stable piece of nature laid out for our fertility.
Oh, lift me to the top of our snow capped pine trees. 
All things green...has saved our souls...

Different Shades of Green:

1. Emerald  2. Chartreuse  3. Seaweed  4. Olive  5. Shamrock  6. Moss 
7. Fertility  8. Pine

Date Written: March 1, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/7/2016 7:54:00 AM
O, what a divine lovely piece.... Congrats Laura, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Teddy :)-luloo
Date: 3/6/2016 11:45:00 AM
Lovely write, Laura Loo!! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:01:00 PM
Many thanks Sarita :)-luloo
Date: 3/3/2016 12:23:00 PM
Hi Luloo! This poem has really created exceptional imagery and also enjoyed the great escape. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/3/2016 9:13:00 PM
Many thanks Bobby :)-luloo
Date: 3/3/2016 12:14:00 PM
Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/3/2016 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Joyce:)-luloo
Date: 3/3/2016 7:07:00 AM
"Our wall built from olive branches, proceeds to block out anything that would get in the way of our wealth." Just an example of the wealth of lush romantic lines from this piece. Excellent write...Congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:50:00 PM
I am very sorry, I just noticed my auto correct was on overload, thank you Dineen :)-luloo
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Date: 3/3/2016 8:01:00 AM
Many thanks Dinner :) -luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/2/2016 8:26:00 PM
Today love is green..well done Laura, congrats on top spot in the contest :)
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Date: 3/3/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Sam :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 7:02:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest.
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Date: 3/3/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 5:18:00 PM
Lovely write Laura, Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 3/2/2016 6:37:00 PM
Many thanks Vladislav :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 5:11:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in the 'Green' contest! Great poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/2/2016 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Laura. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Elaine :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful and descriptive. I never have associated love with anything green until reading this poem. Congrats
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Brian :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 4:20:00 PM
This is a really beautiful poem, Laura. Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Janice :)-luloo
Date: 3/2/2016 3:25:00 PM
Hi Laura, Great poem--congrats on your 1st Place win! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/2/2016 3:28:00 PM
Many thanks Brian :)-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/2/2016 2:23:00 AM
Another beautiful write, Laura. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thank you TJ :)-luloo
Date: 3/1/2016 2:13:00 PM
Wow. This is really great, Laura. The very first phrase drags one into this beautiful write. Sends me on a journey with you and I had a great time. This just flows right off the tongue and the imagery is super. Very impressive, Laura. Peace to you dear lady:)A7
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/1/2016 2:14:00 PM
Aww thank you so much, you are always so sweet. May your day be filled with gratitude and joy :)-luloo *thanks*