Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Love Is Blind

She dances to his tune
When she does his bidding, he’s over the moon
He acts so cool
Yet he plays her for a fool

This innocent girl has got the hots
But she is so naive he’s calling all the shots

She dangles like a puppet on a string
Can’t see that she’s just his plaything

He’s like so many other cheating lying guys
Using her because she’s not worldly wise

She needs to get wise
Get wise to his lies
He wears a disguise
You can’t see his eyes

Get wise
Get wise
Or does he have you hypnotised?
Wise up before he leaves you for another
Get wise so it won't come as a surprise. 


08-07-17

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Bernard Chan August 12, 2017 at 9:37 PM Loving someone leaves you vulnerable. I think that's why some people, girls especially but guys too, are so wary of it. Flowing, perceptive verse. Love it!

Christopher Flaherty August 12, 2017 at 7:23 PM Love is Hypnotized Love Blinds the wisest. Evening Jan I wrote a Poem called Dolphin Tears would be interested what you thought of it

Jean Murray August 9, 2017 at 6:55 AM Wise words well said Jan.

Old Man Emu August 8, 2017 at 11:40 PM Sage advice, wish a lot of young people could read this and dwell on the message. What an impact. Enjoyed this poem Jan, what a wonderfully wise write. Regards, Craig

Eve Roper August 8, 2017 at 8:15 PM to many women fall for this trap and never the wisest... Or no where else to go... you can almost make a Jester poem using Trump. :) and the way he treats his wife and the women around him.. he thinks he's god gift to women

Connie Marcum Wong August 8, 2017 at 7:33 PM Wise advice from a prudent poet! I loved it Jan! Young girls are often attracted to bad boys until they have their eyes opened! : )

Lim'Rik Flats August 8, 2017 at 9:39 AM Grrr! Was a point in time, this father was near-homicidal. Fortunately she bailed before I had to kill him;-) (from a dad's perspective) It sure is a strange thing, how they're attracted to the wild ones. Guess maybe its the same as flies liking that stinky stuff. Ah heck, great poem Jan! Hugapoots ~ j

Michael Bell August 8, 2017 at 9:24 AM A reality cast so poetic - great write

Casarah Nance August 8, 2017 at 8:11 AM so many relationship are like this. you wrote a good warning. hugs Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 8:34 AM Thanks Cas and its SO good to see you back on soup again:-):-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser August 8, 2017 at 6:20 AM So many fall into that trap; well penned and captivating. Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 8:34 AM They sure do ML:-( hugs jan xx

Runping Chen August 8, 2017 at 6:14 AM Love is blind; love should not be blunt or as a blade hurting the love and the beloved. Nice lines about routine life! Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 8:35 AM Thanks Runping:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren Knight August 8, 2017 at 4:17 AM Powerful and packed with truth. Each sentence flows into the next seamlessly. Great poem, Jan. Hugs :) Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 4:58 AM Thanks so much Darren:-) hugs jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 8, 2017 at 3:36 AM Blind love like that can be really deceptive n harmful. Your poem is marvellous in conveying and exposing the conning fooling fickle fake loves out there. I admire the rhyme here too. Warmest wishes pal. Take care. Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 3:56 AM Thanks my friend I am glad its a fiction write for me but of course I have been hurt in the past:-( hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden August 7, 2017 at 10:22 PM I adore free verse with rhyme, and this is wonderful ... I so wish deception was not such an easy tool for people to use, because it causes so much turmoil and grief, as this beautiful poem describes. Love it! Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 3:55 AM People can be so easily deceived in a relationship and its very hard to break free when someone is pulling the strings and you can't let go. I didn't know what form to call it so I labelled it as fee verse - I could reclassify it as rhyme... what do you think?:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe August 7, 2017 at 7:18 PM Much truth in your poem. It's sad to see these situations from the outside. Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 7:22 PM It is Agnes and its really difficult when you see it happen to people you know:-( hugs Jan xx

Akkina Downing August 7, 2017 at 6:53 PM Sad but totally true... hugs :) Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 7:02 PM It is so sad Akkina thanks for your comment:-) hugs Jan x

Joseph May August 7, 2017 at 12:35 PM So true Jan...and it works both ways too...Nicely penned... Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 3:58 PM yes it does work both ways indeed:-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane August 7, 2017 at 12:28 PM Too often people take infatuation for love and allow themselves to be easily led by the hand of another. If someone is treating this one like she's a puppet, she'd best clip those strings from his hands and dance to the tunes of her own choosing. Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 3:58 PM sometimes its so hard to break those bonds Lin:-( hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands August 7, 2017 at 12:23 PM This is a very sad truth Jan. You have written it perfectly. Some people do carry on not seeing things clearly rather than walking away. Well done :) Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 3:59 PM You are so right Heidi:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM It is bad when you get fooled by someone Jan. Many times it is ego...you got lucky you found your hubby. Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 12:16 PM I am blessed Tim and his cancer has brought us even closer together than we ever thought possible.:-) I know there are many that can relate to my words here :-(hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey August 7, 2017 at 11:52 AM So sad that this happens to people! It goes the other way around too, maybe not as much, but a man can be hypnotized to a woman who plays him like a fiddle! I've seen that before! Your poem shows it perfectly! What a fabulous piece my friend, Great Work!! Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 11:55 AM oh yes I agree it works both ways Russell, but this is based on the woman being the victim to his deceptive ways:-( hugs Jan xx