Love Is

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"True love is eternal" -- poet

What is love, my dear love? You cry, I sigh, You sing, my joy, oh, high, Your pain, my mind, full of woe. How much do I love you? I am the bee, you are the hive, I seek the odor, you are the rose, I gaze at the dark sky; in moon, we meet. How deep is my love? I am the core, you are its beat, I am the sea, you are its wave, I am the body; you are its soul. How firm is my love? We may or may not live long, But be sure, I will be ever for you and you will be mine.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2023 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!!!

Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2023 7:19:00 PM

"I am the sea, you are its wave, I am the body; you are its soul." So melded tigether are these lovers . Loved reading your poem of great romance, dear Jay. Congratulations on your win!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/17/2023 7:41:00 PM

Captivating and sublimely spiritual! Warmest congratulations on your win, Jay

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/17/2023 7:20:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest. Have Great Days

Jay Narain
Date: 10/17/2023 12:28:00 PM

Thanks

Lin Lane

Date: 10/17/2023 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jay. I’m delighted for you and proud of you.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/17/2023 12:31:00 PM

You have my support.

Jay Narain
Date: 10/17/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Lin. I needed that.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 1:06:00 AM

What exactly is love? In Italian it is well described. "Ti voglio bene." I wish you all the good things in life. Still your poem is full of great contrasts and and rings so grand to me. Well done.