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Love In the Wild

so focased at her hair, thinking of a chance he blushed, she looked at him as if she didnt care just then his heart was crushed, then walked away with a plastic smile love in the wild, love in the wild.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/28/2016 12:30:00 PM
max frisch, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 9/5/2012 1:03:00 AM
Lovely write Max! Love the repetition 'love in the wild' - it has a nostalgic feel to it. Nice!
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Date: 8/29/2012 5:21:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Max. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:09:00 PM
Max, i like the image,, of freedom,,, thank you for sharing, xox~PD
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:55:00 PM
love the flow and rhyme,nice write Max and welcome to the soup
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