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So beautiful the night with moonlight beams Shining upon your face, smiles never cease. If I could brush those lips: such futile dreams. Kindly thoughts in my head flowed in like streams Why could I not find some degree of peace? So beautiful the night with moonlight beams I fly above you, flittering in streams, And for a while my waning sorrows cease. If I could brush those lips: such futile dreams. May I become a human, be extremes My light body in fire with love increase. So beautiful the night with moonlight beams From afar echoes a stop of these themes. Yet naught can stop thoughts of a shining piece. If I could brush those lips: such futile dreams. My mind must ponder love and so it seems Must muse over those lips so deep cerise, So beautiful the night with moonlight beams If I could brush those lips: such futile dreams. for what it's worth! Sweated out 6 May 2021

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Date: 9/9/2022 7:31:00 AM
I found an old upon which I had not commented. I enjoyed the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. Romantic in theme. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara
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Date: 5/31/2021 8:44:00 AM
Beautiful, Victor ~ congrats on your well deserved POTD. Thank you for sharing ~
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:15:00 AM
Victor, how did I miss this gem, a wonderful creative write and very deservedly won POTD. Congratulations my friend and to many more. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:38:00 PM
Dear Victor, your gifted pen spills with moonlight and magic where romantic possibilities are endless. A beautiful, silky piece that enthralls my heart's imagination. Your repeating lines are exquisite in their dreamy wistful affect. Congratulations for POTD honors with this worthy and well-deserving poem. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:56:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Well written... Ann
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:45:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on having this fine poem honored for POTD my friend. Blessings Victor. xxoo
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:43:00 AM
Hello Victor, i am so pleased that your poem won POTD. Enjoy your day my friend. This poem is romantic.
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Date: 5/10/2021 7:33:00 AM
If only...Congratulations Victor on POTD...You stir romance in the air...Well done.
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Date: 5/9/2021 5:25:00 AM
Back with congrats on your well deserving POTD Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/9/2021 2:21:00 AM
Good Morning Victor - I had to come back to say congratulations on POTD for your beautiful entry. Have an excellent day.
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Date: 5/8/2021 10:11:00 PM
Romantic! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:58:00 PM
"May I become a human, be extremes ?" Yes, anything is possible in a dream. This is beautiful and tender, elegant and graceful, all at the same time. I am wrapping your thoughts softly around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/8/2021 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, with this beautiful romantic outpouring, Victor!
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Date: 5/8/2021 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful and so romantic,Victor, well deserved POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/8/2021 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations my friend , on this excellent poem that captures the essence of love in the moon light, in the heart and soul. Longings that so many feel and oft do so without ever expressing to the object of their affections. A fav.. God bless..
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Date: 5/8/2021 12:38:00 PM
You aced it with this villanelle Victor many congratulations on your POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2021 12:34:00 PM
Hello Victor, Congrts on the win. Your poem is romantic. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/8/2021 11:00:00 AM
congrats Victor on POTD! Blessed are they who are in love!! such a beautiful piece!! shall soup mail you! well done!!
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:22:00 AM
A lovely poem, Victor! Many congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/8/2021 8:17:00 AM
Well done Victor! Congratulations on Potd!
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Date: 5/8/2021 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful story/write. Love your line, "So beautiful the night with moonlight beams." The full moon and the light is so pretty. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 5/8/2021 7:42:00 AM
A beautifully written Villanelle, Victor! Well worth your efforts. Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/8/2021 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on POTD honors. The repetition of the lines, make a well written villanelle one of the prettiest poems to read. You have done well, Enjoy your weekend.
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Date: 5/8/2021 5:02:00 AM
Just as I predicted, Victor. Delighted to see you again in this space. BIG congrats on poem of the day.
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Date: 5/8/2021 4:45:00 AM
Nicely written. This deserved to be selected as poem of the day.
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