Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

Love In the Making

Your laugh,
your glittering eyes,
lips slightly parted
warm breath from flared nostrils,
the rhythm of your heart,
silky skin sweetly perfumed,
and ghostly caresses from cultured hands.
 
Is that your recipe for our love?
A luscious dinner fit for a king?
A priceless princess sacrificed
on the altar of love?  All around
the smell of intoxicating incense
increases my sensation
of being on a lofty cloud
experiencing a much-desired dream
that has now come true.
 
Stars glitter, night surrounds,
in the dark, I hear your loving whispers,
espy your feline eyes
glittering in the nebulous mist,
feel you next to me 
Ecstasy. 
My love is now complete.

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Speaks Volumes December 11, 2022 at 1:20 PM Not sure how missed this beautiful poem Victor, It is definitely a favorite. So sensuial so inviting, so overpoweringly delightful.

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2022 at 2:58 AM Passionate lines penned. You must have a new girlfriend about whom you are thinking. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2022 at 7:20 AM - A poem that the heart understands ... beautiful, my friend Victor :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel November 28, 2022 at 12:38 AM Very romantic, Victor:)

Tom Cunningham November 27, 2022 at 2:03 PM Very sensual and romantic Victor. Tom

I Am Anaya November 27, 2022 at 1:17 PM A luscious dinner fit for a king? A priceless princess sacrificed on the altar of love? Very interesting.

Joseph P. DiMino November 27, 2022 at 12:03 PM "Stars glitter, night surrounds, in the dark, I hear your loving whispers, espy your feline eyes glittering in the nebulous mist, feel you next to me Ecstasy. My love is now complete." Very intense, beautiful! Poetry does not get better. Thank you for sharing.

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 27, 2022 at 11:57 AM Pleasantly romantic, with beautiful images. :)

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2022 at 10:44 AM Sensuous and beautiful, Victor.

Eve Roper November 27, 2022 at 9:14 AM Love, have had , has lost, will find again. Blessings my friend

Vijay Pandit November 27, 2022 at 8:36 AM A charming verse adorned in voice of love, Victor. Enjoyed the sound of your romantic rhythms.

Sotto Poet November 27, 2022 at 7:17 AM These are sensual thoughts! A compelling story.

Valsa George November 27, 2022 at 5:23 AM "in the dark, I hear your loving whispers, espy your feline eyes glittering in the nebulous mist".... Very sensuous descriptions ! A gripping tale of love!