Love in our Path

When Love crouches, stealth, in our path Embrace it ~ Never ever arouse its wrath

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John Lawless

Date: 5/27/2024 6:42:00 AM

sounds as if you've slept on the couch a few nights Gershon.....

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/26/2024 5:30:00 PM

Hmm. And interesting concept for sure. But for a woman, crouching love may not be a good thing.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2024 9:19:00 PM

You've got that right, Hilda. ~ Crouch and Cower

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/26/2024 3:47:00 PM

sound advice...and a bit witty :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2024 9:18:00 PM

Just a bit witty. I understand, being the totally serious guy I am! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2024 11:14:00 AM

Hello Gershon, There is a goood message there. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/27/2024 11:13:00 AM

Hello Gershon, No Gershon, I live in Canada. The Canadian memorial day for us is in November. I am wishing you a happy Memorial Day. Thank you anyway. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2024 9:16:00 PM

Hey, Darlene. Thanks for the nice comments. Happy and Meaningful Memorial Day to you. :) Gershon