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Love In Exile

You reinvented me giving me a rebel's energy, providing license for my love to sing the touch of your soul meaning everything, From us wild words arose speaking of history and stars we chose, expecting too much of Destiny venturing on through wilderness and purity, Inspiration innocent in it's infliction made us bleed for need of salted affection, exhibitionists with effrontery for the eyes of etiquette expressionism unfolding humanism from stellar grit, When wisdom had no mercy she was a woman feminine in fury, wanting to be stronger than truth when I said I love you she demanded no proof, All she wanted was a pretty poem poetry that brings happiness home, so we made substance of swagger feeding life gold mined from passion's matter - J.A.B.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/16/2015 5:26:00 PM

Had to return to this gorgeous poem, Justin. "All she wanted was a pretty poem, poetry that brings happiness home." Such heartwarming words. Love changes us in the most marvelous ways...words, expressions, and revelations through poetry heighten our awareness to something greater, and even spiritual. A very satisfying poem to revisit today. always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 11/16/2015 10:22:00 PM

Your wisdom and passion satisfy me, yet I always pine for more of your powers. Love is a holy ingniter. It feels so good to know that you are craving for my next composition Laura, its gonna rock your world woman! J.A.B.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 9/23/2015 10:18:00 PM

Exhilarating description about love and passion.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/24/2015 5:59:00 PM

You're welcome Justin

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/24/2015 12:45:00 AM

Thank you Nayda, your feelings reinforce the power of our love. She and I have taught Love something new...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/18/2014 11:41:00 PM

Beautifully told about the soul Justin... Love is afire. Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/19/2014 1:16:00 AM

" The touch of your soul meaning everything...", this is the essence of our Love Verlena. Yes, love burns in so many ways my friend. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/19/2014 6:26:00 AM

the first then all the succeeding paragraph.. ;) so sweet and well i can see inspiration welling up... "woman feminine in fury.. " :) wow... fury in so loving ways.. :) again awesome write. :D

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/19/2014 1:40:00 PM

Yes Olive, sometimes Love grows mad and furiously beautiful. She and I have created super rich love. Thanks for visiting again Olive. J.A.B.

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 6/9/2014 10:15:00 PM

Very sweet and passionate poem, loved "stellar grit". You should do one for Norwegian Wood! Great song and you could certainly do it justice.

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/17/2014 1:29:00 PM

Yeah Riverbank, stellar grit really expresses the grind and enfurance that love can be. Your poetry is incredible. J.A.B.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/8/2014 3:58:00 PM

This is so very, very beautiful. Some of us don't ask for much. Some simple things in life can make us happy. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/9/2014 12:48:00 PM

We did so the very best way that we knew how Lucilla. I thank you for ypur beautiful wisdom my friend. J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/4/2014 11:20:00 PM

Beautiful!.... Poetry can do some wondrous things. It can connect people through emotion, heal pain in a therapeutic way, build friendships, and of course it can be used for romance.... I really enjoyed your poem, Justin, especially that last stanza. Loved the rhyme in this, also!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/5/2014 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Kelly for your beautiful thoughts and poetry. Partners in Passion, a real blessing. Happy you enjoyed the rhyme structure. I prefer free verse alliteration coupled with inner line rhyming, but sometimes I get a craving to produce a more classic tempo. Thanks. J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2014 8:39:00 PM

Justin, if you will see my blog, you will know that I don't often return to see replies like you have just left me here today, but I am glad I came back to reread this one and see that reply to me!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/2/2014 1:57:00 PM

The poetry of our lives lives well beyond the page Andrea. J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2014 11:41:00 PM

a passionate write, Justin. gosh, long time no see. I sure enjoyed seeing this poem today.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/31/2014 1:33:00 PM

Passion is my purpose Andrea, and I apologize for not sharing more with you, sometimes my passion makes my a rude man. You are a gifted artist. Your visit makes me smile wide. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/29/2014 4:05:00 PM

Lovely, Justin. Your muse is a powerful woman to bring such depth of emotion out of you. A poem is the most touching gift of a soul.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/30/2014 8:28:00 PM

I whole heartedly agree Eileen. She is a wonder, a mircale, a sweet suffering, magic in the loneliness of Love. You have composed many a blessing in your amazing poetry Eileen. J.A.B.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2014 11:57:00 AM

Ahh!!..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/30/2014 8:23:00 PM

I am grateful I am able to give you soul worth seeing Sara, thank you! J.A.B.

Elaine George

Date: 5/28/2014 6:30:00 AM

There is nothing that can capture the heart of a women better, than a love poem written especially for her. You my friend, are a very gifted writer. Also thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/28/2014 8:27:00 PM

Thete is no better purpose for Poetry than to illustrate the essence of Love's dynamics Lainie. You speak truth, and kindness my friend. I have composed additional love works through the Adam & Eve account with an extraordinary Poetess, some of the writes are solo works and others in the account are collaborations, the saga we've created together is replete with love. I'm sure you'd enjoy. J.A.B.

Lena Emp

Date: 5/27/2014 11:40:00 PM

The simplicity of true love express in poems. Great one.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/28/2014 12:52:00 AM

Thanks Lena, as the poem says, poeyry bringing happiness home. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/27/2014 8:22:00 PM

I think you'll touch many souls with this piece of work- I know you've touched mine. I admire your smooth rhyming throughout. These are the kind of poems that keep love and inspiration going. It was a great pleasure reading, and I will happily read it many more times.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/27/2014 9:01:00 PM

Thanks for the kind praise Laura, the feeling is mutual, your Poetry is marvelous! I just like how thete is nothing one dimensional about this love and Art. Love evolving. J.A.B.

Ken Carroll

Date: 5/27/2014 8:13:00 PM

Good stuff Justin..Thanks for your visit to my page!

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/27/2014 8:55:00 PM

Thanks Ken, Love diversifies my style, like how the woman in this poem is capable of "Reinventing" the Man. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2014 8:06:00 PM

Justin, throughout the poem love does not speak, a flawless poem. Humanism, wanting to extract love from exile. The best love will not utter a word or ask for proof. I learned that through (nate). So yes, I know what you are talking about. When affection wonders, and decides to exile the love for the time to be. Love then regains consciousness and becomes stronger, when joined and spoken of. The power of love, gets better on its return.... Awesome poem.... Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/27/2014 8:52:00 PM

The love is in every letter Linda, aware of It's power through the union of two souls. Love is the essence of life, and as this poem illustrates, it will not be defined by a word or single action. Silent love has a beautiful attitude, glade you experienced that with Nate. I love your poetic comment, your wisdom has mercy my Sphinx. J.A.B.