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Love In a Far Off Place

Love in a far off place My moon was so shy that it hid behind the darker clouds, And cherished my twinkle in serenity beyond real world at a far off place, Veils of bright sun and vibrant nights as memorable moments stayed by, Where silver sparkles brilliantly lit glowed the full moon to night's illumine ! Written July 27th, 2015 For contest by Frank Herrara

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/9/2015 8:20:00 AM
I enjoyed travelling to this far off place.
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
I feel I've just been transported to this far off place. Lovely imagery, wishing you well in Frank's contest, James :) :)
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:42:00 AM
This is beautiful Dr Upma ! Thank you for visiting my poems ~lee
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:48:00 AM
It's brilliant but I thought the presentation was even more superb because that's pulled me in, having those empty spaces in between the title and your first word, gave me the visual presentation of the heights and the depths, where words becomes unnecessary. The poem itself reminds me of Shakespeare.
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:48:00 AM
I like the build-up of imagery in the last couple of lines. Well done - a 7 from me.
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Date: 7/27/2015 6:51:00 PM
a beauty!!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:26:00 AM
I need my shades for this one, it is soo bright! :), jill
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