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Once our love was like hot glowing embers, torrid, sultry and heated were our days and nights. Your touch lit my very soul, our lovemaking sizzling and steamy; and our hearts entwined intense and fierce, and then this love died like ashes and faded into cold dead embers. Our love turned and became frosty, gentleness became a snowy avalanche. Bone-chilling words clashed, and love like icy snowflakes fell; frigid snow storms filled our days and nights, until a great snow drift divided us, and then love, was just gone . . . _____________________ January 4, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Love Gone Cold Copyright Protected, ID 18-9801-43-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, A Stunner January 2018 sponsor, Line Gauthier Second Place** ________________________ Written for the contest, Embers and Snowflakes sponsor, Anthony Slausen, Judged, January 26, 2018 - NA

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Date: 3/21/2018 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your fine win.
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Date: 3/18/2018 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I hope that the warmth comes again in another shape or form. Many wishes, Kai
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:15:00 AM
Kai thank you for the congratulations
Date: 3/18/2018 2:57:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:15:00 AM
Greg thank you for the congratulations
Date: 3/17/2018 7:34:00 PM
Broken Wings, so very well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:14:00 AM
Eve thanks for the congratulations
Date: 3/17/2018 1:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem B.W., touching and beautiful written - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:13:00 AM
Sun thank you for your sweet congratulations
Date: 3/17/2018 9:24:00 AM
The style reflects the love gone cold with its matter-of-fact description. Well done, BW. Congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:13:00 AM
Line thank you for the contest and my awesome win
Date: 1/6/2018 1:11:00 AM
"and love fell like icy snowflakes falling," I love that line in this beautiful poem BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:12:00 AM
James thank you so much
Date: 1/4/2018 9:08:00 PM
Gorgeous penning Constance! Wonderful for this contest, my best to you! xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2018 10:10:00 AM
Maureen thank you for the gorgeous

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