Love Gone Sour

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Don't try this at home..

In the end a love turned bitter Once fresh bouquet starts to wither Their hearts bear all the strain Of love's cruel distain Their sour love tale I deliver

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James Peranteau

Date: 3/3/2024 5:22:00 AM

ya know that banana that one tosses in the compost 'cuz ...well, for whut'ever; i never have or had the problem toss'n them...lol, thought 'bout the money i spent on it for a second, but, i'd just go to the market and grab another...loved the write, ment to comment a bit ago ;) much love to ya dear poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, James. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2024 11:03:00 AM

Once fresh bouquet starts to wither…that is when it all begins to come undone…either catch the dropped stitches or it all unravels

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 11:50:00 AM

Got that right. Sometimes it happens so early on, and people are left wondering why. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2024 8:49:00 AM

I like the flowers for metaphor of marriage. Some of them almost seem to have the actual life span of a flower!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2024 10:50:00 AM

Yes, some marriages last about as long as the blossoms on a flower, but of course, some last as long as the bulb that is under the ground. Thanks for the visit and the kind review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/10/2024 7:10:00 AM

Dear sara, sad and sour well delivered with clever rhymes and flow, in this limerick, so many bouquets start to wither when honeymoon phase is over, and masks fall and truth unveils. Sad reality too. Youve delivered one that is so powerful and creative! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2024 7:41:00 AM

IE, isn't it sad that some people put on an act as to who they are, etc. so that the other person does not have any idea of what they are getting into. Thanks for your thoughts on this one. Sara K

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/10/2024 6:44:00 AM

Hi Sara, Very cute and appropriate pre Valentines Day. Loved the pic. Enjoy your day!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2024 7:05:00 AM

Why, thank you, Nancy. Thanks for the visit. Looks like there shall be showers or sprinkles here. Sara K