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Love For Lorn

I Know what I can give I knew what I have given It doesn't matter what I get in return It is my choice, don't care if its love for lorn I'll give you all I got though People say its a lot But who are they to care? When for me it is all fair. I've seen what you can do Maybe it's just a thing or two Its crazy how I'm still genuinely happy maybe because you're my Reasonable reason I'd rather have cognitive dissonance And tell people why wouldn't I give it a chance? Its my life and its my choice I'll live mine and it's nothing same with yours. At the end of the day, Still, I ask myself why? Everything's seems to be perfect Unnoticed, all the effects. Truly, I am attached to you Yet no regret in liking you I pray someday you'll feel the same And prove that all wasn't a shame. People tell you they want you They all see what's good about you There's a difference with people who wants you, And I, would do anything to keep you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/4/2016 7:10:00 AM
Chazmyne, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:00:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Chazmyne. :)
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:38:00 PM
Chazmyne Sioson, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2016 2:34:00 PM
Hi, welcome to soup. I can see that you are expressing some real hurt, so I won't say to much and let it just be what it is, a release. I know this is not an "abc" poem, but I get what you're saying... it's as simple as A. B. C. Hope the hurt starts to diminish. Cyndi
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:30:00 AM
Hi Chazmyne, nice to see this ABC form poem(N), FA Sure SO nice,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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