Love Defined-2

Love defined

There is not much to  love, when it’s  defined
With material things it looks aligned.
Should  love at all need a prop
Which fails at times and love flops.
Making the once enshrined  the most maligned.

01/sept/12
S.Jagathsimhan Nair.
For: SKAT's Define Love contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/15/2012 2:51:00 AM
"love defined",i like it, a real "truism"!! check me out at:www.thepoetbandcompany.yolasite.com(click on guidelines,see my "bio.,thanks) wewuvpoetry@hotmail.com arthur.c. ford
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:38:00 PM
cute limericking!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
congrats Jag on a great win with words defining love so well .. luv .. hope u r well .. I am trying to bounce back but my hands are so bad right now ..
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jag xx
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:12:00 PM
JAg , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:34:00 PM
Wise limerick and a WINNER! You are right with this theme...keep love simple!! Congrats, Jaggy. Hope your spiritual journey this week was enjoyable for u and your loved ones! :) Hope u returned home safely! g.
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Date: 9/5/2012 10:10:00 AM
congrats on this wonderful winner. a very clever poem, so well written.
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 PM
Interesting and thought provoking write Jag....congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:04:00 PM
JAGATHSIMHAN, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Date: 9/4/2012 3:29:00 AM
a most reflective write... love is intangible, jag.. much enjoyed with winning huggs!..:)
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:46:00 AM
A real good poem Jag. And a lovely "little lady" on your photo. Have a great new week. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:07:00 AM
Interesting approach to the contest Jag, enjoyed it.. All the best for the contest ;)
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Date: 9/3/2012 8:59:00 AM
good entry,good luck Jag
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Date: 9/2/2012 11:43:00 AM
a good lymerick. Thanks for sharing it! Cindy
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Date: 9/2/2012 8:59:00 AM
such an honest and lovely praise for that one special thing called love, jag.. winning huggs!
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Date: 9/2/2012 7:41:00 AM
No props should be needed like fancy rings, expensive gifts,...this is filled with wisdom and has a strong flow..."Break a Leg" in the contest! (Means good luck!) The Avatar of Dot looks smashing, I think you'll agree. What a precious little pic of the Tricycle Princess! gwendolen
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 9/2/2012 8:32:00 AM
Rings and gifts and such stuff are not props..it has to do with deeper, wider things..
Date: 9/1/2012 12:03:00 AM
Looks like a good limerick for the contest.
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:51:00 PM
Very good Limerick on Love here Jag!Best wishes to you.
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:22:00 PM
Nice, philosophical treatise on love. Love is, indeed, immaterial! It is heartfelt! Enjoyed your poem!
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