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Love Come Down

I was in my room late one night, Bitterness and rage was insight. I was alone and broken, Cold and tired. Quite honestly, I had forgotten why I'm me. Heart and care already down the street. Light and love, come down on me! See me, meet me... Help me. Love, come down. Break me, shape me Oh please, God, remake me! Now you see why I'm struggling I'm missing the piece John 3:16 Love, come down on me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/9/2016 12:45:00 AM
awesome to read again, Courtney. skat
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:50:00 PM
Hi Courtney, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:31:00 PM
Courtney, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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