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Love Can Shift- Contest

Love is such a strong force,
it can give one a desire to live and become 
a life source 

Or it can shift,
It can also change course; turn numb
so swift 

Now hate
is the outcome;
fate

Love is such a strong force,
It can also change course, turn numb;
fate






Contest: Let's Minichu on Love or Hate
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani
02/17/2021

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/6/2021 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis. Well done. Thanks for soupmail visit Re my submission. Howard

Marilene Evans

Date: 3/5/2021 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations, Alexis. So so true.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:46:00 AM

Very nice Alexis. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 4:14:00 AM

Alexis, a perfect Minichu. Would have placed much higher except that title was requested to be different. Sorry for being strict on it but in past also have done that to other poets and therefore being consistent. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan.

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/5/2021 8:25:00 AM

Hi Mohan, You held a good contest. I should have read your contest rules better. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 2/21/2021 2:46:00 AM

You have done an excellent job with this Minichu on Love or Hate, Alexis. I hope your judge reasons like me!:) Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/18/2021 6:15:00 AM

It is sad when emotions shift in the wrong direction. One must be vigilant in protecting their important relationships. Well expressed piece. All the best for the contest. ;0)