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Love By Any Other Name

a meandering breeze shuffles starlight
while a serenade whispered moves to tears a low hanging moon
~ the goodnight kiss lingers



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on July 13, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE sponsosred by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 5TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:59 AM
"the goodnight kiss lingers" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 6:33 PM
Thanks, Christuraj ~
Seeker Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 7:59 PM
I’ll plagiarise gw’s comment ~ Awesome!
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 8:49 PM
That's the kind of plagiarism I love ~ thank you so much for fav'ing ~
Seeker Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 8:01 PM
A fave, in fact!
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Line. Your pen is just superb and your poem with great rhyme and stunning metaphors. Blessings
Gauthier Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Thank you very much, Sotto ~
Romios Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Excellent and best wishes in Brian’s contest. All the lines are outstanding and draw the reader in, Liove Pamagiota xxx
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:23 PM
Thank you very much, Panagiota ~
Peck Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Just beautiful, Line. I love "shuffles starlight"
Gauthier Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:03 AM
Thank you very much, Ann ~
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Awesome, Line! Gosh, I rarely use that word. But it applies here!!! ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:58 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~
Slaughter Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Line, this is beautiful. I love the middle line, especially..."moves to tears a low hanging moon". Ah, what exquisite imagery.
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:24 PM
Thank you very much, Jim ~
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