Love Burnt Ashes

Sincere I forget, distrust I hurt 
a grudge of distraction. Mere I 
tend to resent, lust observe 
must it happen. Insist despair 
I exist, such blood nerves 
in scratches. Dare I admit 
I’m scared, in dust & 
Love Burnt Ashes.
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Tellaferro Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Nice! Love the use of your words and the feelings they generate. Keep it up!
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August 11, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you so much I do appreciate it. I love all kinds of feedback on my poetry.
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