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Love Broke Through Hurts Shell

I was left wounded and broken to the core, Love was a myth; I felt unlovable as well. I didn’t think I was worthy of anything more, I was left wounded and broken to the core. You showed up out of nowhere, I opened the door. Your love for me broke me out of hurt’s shell. I was left wounded and broken to the core, Love was a myth; I felt unlovable as well. Alexis Y. 05/27/2021

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2021 7:46:00 AM

You are a beautiful, kind and loving person, Alexis, we at PS love you:) as does our Lord:) your triolet is proof of what His love can accomplish:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/28/2021 7:25:00 PM

It takes love to heal the hurt, been there too Alexis, you said it well… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/28/2021 12:04:00 PM

Nothing heals like love --- and time. ~ Wounded Warrior

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 12:03:00 PM

A very moving triolet, Alexis, I understand what you meant about how love can be restorative, I myself have had struggles with feeling unloved too so I can relate to this~

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2021 12:01:00 PM

Hi everyone, I went back and changed the title and edited a line because I did not intend for the poem to be just about someone wounded and broken. I wanted to show the healing power of love. I appreciate everyone that read and commented. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2021 10:16:00 AM

you are adorable and loveable - no more tears in your life - that was a long time ago, only happiness and love and adventure for you dear Alexis. Hugs, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/28/2021 12:04:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, You are correct; that is why I went back edited the poem so it could show the healing power of love. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/28/2021 8:26:00 AM

While I was reading this interesting Triolet, Alexis, I thoroughly appreciated it. However, I must say that I didn't appreciate what you had to go through. And you are so adorable, and you really deserve the best.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2021 4:48:00 AM

Emotive write, Alexis. Well executed triolet.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/28/2021 3:55:00 AM

How sad. I would wish you all the good things in life. because you are lovable.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/28/2021 2:27:00 AM

A broken heart takes time to heal Alexis and you never forget. Hope you're keeping well, enjoy your weekend. Tom