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Love Beneath the Stars

The stars move round in perfect harmony,
All planets move in their destined paths, 
Never wavering. The harmony of celestial routes.
And now and then in the dark of the night,
I climb onto my roof and watch the million stars
Shining upon the earth with all their splendour.

Look right down in the sky, is that not the morning star 
Many label it as Venus which does not twinkle,
But stares directly into your eyes, evoking love.
Oh, how elated can one feel, mesmerised by emotions
So deep into our hearts as we yearn for companionship.

Hush, the culmination of love comes with the moon
As it moves up above the dark purple hills.
I call my wife to come and see the enormous wonder
Of the dazzling resplendent night panorama,
Knew that our love now blends into a romantic oneness.
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Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Beautifully crafted of the stars and romance; I can visualize you two sitting up there on the roof, gazing at the stars. Beautiful.
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 9:46 PM
This is just wonderful, Victor. sorry I have not been here a while. Nursing my hubbie who got covid but he is much better now, and i escaped it!!
Ricci Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Victor Victor Victor - I will not touch your entry because you have spoken beautiful poetically and yes imagery and the emotive factors are present... Thank you for sharing. Blessings always and always...
Deo Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 6:59 PM
Loved how the sky's wonders has to be shared with wife / spouse, to become even more profound. Yes, Sir, we will always have that ( a roof to gaze from, added pleasure & adventure). shalom. Paz! anil
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 4:24 PM
... it is harmonious, fascinating, romantic and beautiful ... a wonderful poem, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 10:40 AM
So great to read of a starry night love affair, Victor. This is a fave for me. Blessings
Roper Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 8:33 AM
The night is truly romantic with its stage of players, all beautiful with their glider.. great write my friend
Jayasankar Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 8:26 AM
This is one of your best dear Victor... Loved how you weaved your verse so perfectly, apt for the title. Yes, nothing more beautiful than watching the stars in the harmonious sky, with your dear loved one.. God bless...~ Ani
Lawrence Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 7:25 AM
I love this Victor … a fav ! Beautiful imagined . There is nothing like gazing at the celestial galaxy. The love you share with your wife is a blessing and a gift . So well expressed here. All the best , Susan :)
Poet Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Victor, Is there anything more romantic than falling in love in perfect harmony under the stars and the moon? As always, eloquently stated with breathtakingly lovely details. Skywatching is a beautiful experience, and it's even better when you can enjoy it with your significant other. Your finely crafted poem strikes a connection within me with its cosmic majesty.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Nothing like sharing the million stars of shining splendor and the moon moving up the dark purple hills, in blended romantic oneness! Enjoyed, my friend! :) ~ hugs
Skelly Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Hello Victor, just popped in to keep in touch with your poems...Love, and the stars overlooked by the moon, very nice indeed...Delice
George Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 1:23 AM
So lovely dear friend ! This calm night under the star spangled sky with the Moon and Venus shining bright is heavenly for romance
Hankins Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 3:03 PM
Victor, I see your poem as marvelous Blank Verse. It flows along so nicely and has no rhyme. Occasionally I try to write something in Blank Verse, but it is so difficult to do. I think you have done it rather naturally. Good work!
Pandit Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 2:08 PM
What could be better than love in perfect harmony beneath the moon and stars. Eloquently expressed, as always, with picture perfect details.
Cunningham Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Nothing better than observing the heavens and even better to share it with the one you love. Tom
Calasibetta Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 1:09 PM
HI Victor~Your beautifully penned poem with its celestial splendor resonates with me. Like my poem Trigon, we both speak of Venus and the Moon~yours of the romance of night and mine about the symphony of the rising sun. I hope you wife enjoyed the splendor too! Blessings,Paulette
Boles Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 12:59 PM
A bit of science, fantasy, and romance melded into one. Nice...ab
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