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Love At First Sight Mr

It was the very first time I lay my eyes on him he smelled like summer and rays of sunshine "Be still my heart" I whispered to myself but as he uttered his first words to me, the rose inside my heart bloomed, of its own accord...

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2023 10:53:00 AM

- A lovely example, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2023 9:33:00 AM

Lovely romantic poem!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2023 4:58:00 PM

Thank you dear Paige

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2023 5:34:00 AM

Simply beautiful!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2023 5:52:00 AM

Thank you Vijay for always being there when a comment is needed. Sending you a smile, :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/21/2023 1:05:00 AM

wonderful, it made me cry have a nice day yann

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2023 5:52:00 AM

Sweet Yann, how love can make us cry or laugh, I pray you laugh, and love always, :)

Deb M

Date: 3/20/2023 11:51:00 PM

Awww beautiful, beautiful and more beautiful!! Rose your poem says it all…absolutely love it….Debx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you dear Db, I hope you join the contest, I am sure you have a rose blooming in your beautiful heart, xo

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/20/2023 8:18:00 PM

I congratulate you on your love, Mystic. Not many couples last more than a year. And I wish you many more years to celebrate your lasting love. :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you dear Fin, every relationship has its ups and downs, but if its true love, you weather the storms together, and hope for the best, :)

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/20/2023 6:39:00 PM

Ah, no one can ever forget their first love. The sweetest moment of our life… And in this short yet very detailed of beautiful and romantic love bloomed.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/20/2023 8:02:00 PM

no our first love remains in our hearts forever, I was lucky enough to marry my first love, he is still my first and last, after over 40 years, ")

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/20/2023 3:42:00 PM

example for my contest