Love At First Sight

I enter the room breathlessly,
Somehow anticipating that tonight will change everything.
I sit quietly among strangers lost in their own worlds.
Cell phones buzzing, coffee steaming.

We all glance at watches,
Even some that aren't wearing any.
The air is electric as everyone is keenly aware
That tonight has the power to change the world.

I know that my love has not arrived yet,
Although I have never met or talked to him before.
A tired looking woman beckons me from the back room
And robotically I answer her call.

And in another room full of people and chaos,
I immediately see HIM.
He is perfect, though not at all what I expected.
Our eyes lock briefly, I smile and wave.

I'm wishing I had a mirror and had taken the time to "freshen up."
Other women in the room are as obsessed with him as I am.
I grab the barrette from my hair,
And like every ingenue I've ever seen on TV, I shake loose my curls coquettishly.

I think I have caught his eye, but suddenly his entourage rushes him from the room.
My heart slows a bit and I feel the color draining from my face.
Someone is holding my arm, sensing my weakness.
"He'll be back in a minute, why don't you sit down?"

I sit and for the first time, I notice HER.
Glowing, happy, giggling . . . the center of everyone's attention.
And the game just became REAL!
For it is she who stole my last love.

We make small talk, pretending no animosity exists.
Until a door opens, and HE is back.
New clothes, blue to match his eyes,
And I can't keep a little gasp from escaping my lips.

Of course, he flies right into the arms of my nemesis.
I move in, touching his arm, briefly holding his hand.
Even brazenly stroking his dark curls when SHE looks away.
And I see him respond -- glances in my direction, guarded smiles.

I am lost in a world where only he and I exist.
The room and everyone in it disappears and the two of us are floating away.
Without warning, I realize she must have seen our exchange.
And the room and everyone in it comes back into focus.

I look at my nemesis. She looks back at me.
"Would you like to hold him?" she says, seemingly without guile.
I cannot help myself. "YES!" I say, a little too quickly and loudly.
Unselfishly, my daughter-in-law gives him up. At last, my newborn grandson and I can start our love story.

7/14/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcconnell Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Such a lovely penned piece Cindi, great imagery and insightful thought. Blessings,Gordon
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 7:04 AM
Greetings Cindi! Congratulations for your #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
Romaine Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Hey Cindi, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning in the contest! Such a beautiful story of your little grandson. I can tell it's going to be a great love story. A well deserved win!! Be Blessed, Neva
A  Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Cindi, Congratulations on your lovely poetic mood win. LUV SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Well done! Congratulations on your win. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:50 PM
What an exquisite write Cindi.. congrats on much deserved first place win!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 2:38 PM
lovely poem Cindi congrats on 1st hugs
A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM
CINDI. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Sweet! I love reading your flirt congrats on your win!
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:33 PM
Completely threw me. What a lovely write, Cindi, well done. Viv x
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:46 PM
a great love story many congrats on your beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Cindi, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Great story, thank you for entering ;)
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:12 PM
love the twist and the use of nemesis ....Tim
Rockwell Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Thanks Tim!
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