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Love At First Sight

How lovely it was to romp on the grass,
How easy it was to make friends with her.
I saw her in a car a comely lass,
But their red car sped on in quite a blur.

How easy it was to make friends with her.
I barked at my master to make him speed 
But their red car sped on in quite a blur.
We both caught up to park, and we were freed.

I barked at my master to make him speed 
I saw her in a car a comely lass,
We both caught up to park, and we were freed.
How lovely it was to romp on the grass.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 5/22/2023 1:23:00 PM Reads like an exciting time on high speed chases and love at first sight. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this escapade with us. I enjoyed reading it. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/28/2023 11:12:00 AM This is a charming tale of canine happiness, Victor. I'm glad his master caught the red car. :) Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 3/28/2023 9:47:00 AM Victor this is what a delightful sight it was to see the canine couple enjoying themselves so much in the grass! Login to Reply

Komal Walimbe Date: 3/28/2023 2:40:00 AM Ha! Beautifully written... :) Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/27/2023 10:09:00 PM Beautiful Pantoum ! Your eagerness to meet her at the earliest made you bark at your master to speed the car to keep pace with hers :) Glad finally you could meet ! Login to Reply

Fin Chuuk Date: 3/27/2023 9:01:00 PM So very lovely, Vic. Made me smile :) And a great Pantoum it is. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/27/2023 8:04:00 PM Great Pantoum, great fell and imagery . Hugs Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 3/27/2023 6:22:00 PM I'm pleased to hear that they met up alas at the dog park or maybe the masters noticed each other as well! A warm and fuzzy tail, lol. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 3/27/2023 9:54:00 AM Wow! Victor, This was a joy to read. You described the scene so well. I enjoyed the read my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/27/2023 9:32:00 AM Lovely write Victor, best wishes Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/27/2023 6:41:00 AM Victor - How lovely the doggie pair made it to a romp of grandeur in the grass… Belle Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/27/2023 5:16:00 AM no greater place than the grass for a happy romp :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2023 5:14:00 AM Succinctly delivered tale--splendidly done, Victor. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/27/2023 4:12:00 AM This is so cute! Smiling :) Login to Reply

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/27/2023 3:06:00 AM How adorable Victor, a precious poem of puppy love! <3 Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2023 2:28:00 AM - A perfect couple, Victor - Love it :) - hugs Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/27/2023 1:13:00 AM Hi Victor, I guess this is doggy love story, very charming:) Login to Reply