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Love At First Sight

How lovely it was to romp on the grass, How easy it was to make friends with her. I saw her in a car a comely lass, But their red car sped on in quite a blur. How easy it was to make friends with her. I barked at my master to make him speed But their red car sped on in quite a blur. We both caught up to park, and we were freed. I barked at my master to make him speed I saw her in a car a comely lass, We both caught up to park, and we were freed. How lovely it was to romp on the grass.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2023 1:23:00 PM

Reads like an exciting time on high speed chases and love at first sight. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this escapade with us. I enjoyed reading it. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/28/2023 11:12:00 AM

This is a charming tale of canine happiness, Victor. I'm glad his master caught the red car. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/28/2023 9:47:00 AM

Victor this is what a delightful sight it was to see the canine couple enjoying themselves so much in the grass!

Komal Walimbe

Date: 3/28/2023 2:40:00 AM

Ha! Beautifully written... :)

Valsa George

Date: 3/27/2023 10:09:00 PM

Beautiful Pantoum ! Your eagerness to meet her at the earliest made you bark at your master to speed the car to keep pace with hers :) Glad finally you could meet !