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My love is like the sunrise on a warm summer’s day. Clouds from purple to pink To orange slowly make way. The rays of light soon appear with the fading of the night. The morning air fresh and warm as day begins its flight. The sun appears in the sky And birds begin to sing; And just like the start of day, Love’s a beautiful thing. Like the sunrise my love is fresh, Colors of every hue; Bright and warm and full of cheer, Each day begins anew.

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Date: 1/6/2018 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations, John...reading through your poetry I've noticed several wins. Not surprising.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Rhoda, you are too kind.
Date: 12/3/2017 6:44:00 PM
I love this poem. Beautiful! :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/3/2017 8:09:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for your wonderful comments. John
Date: 11/7/2017 9:07:00 PM
John, such a wonderfully romantic write with lovely imagery. Such a delightful pleasure to read. Enjoyed! Congratulations on your placement in the contest!!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/7/2017 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, I always appreciate your lovely comments. John
Date: 11/7/2017 3:40:00 AM
A lovely fresh look at Love. Beautiful John, congratulations on your placement ...Maria
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/7/2017 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Maria, for your comments and visit.
Date: 11/5/2017 8:53:00 AM
Beautiful imagery of all those transitions. Lovely poem. Congrats on your win, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/5/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Line. Congrats to you as well, I enjoyed your sad, emotional poem; very heartfelt.
Date: 11/5/2017 7:22:00 AM
So lovely John.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/5/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, SO, and thanks for sponsoring the contest.
Date: 11/1/2017 5:23:00 PM
LIke a beautiful lyric, John . It sings with imagery.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/1/2017 8:25:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for your visit and kind word. I always appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 10/29/2017 7:04:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful. I felt like I was sitting there watching the sin rise. I love it John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/29/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Terri, I’m so glad you enjoyed it! John
Date: 10/24/2017 10:44:00 AM
Hi John, This is so beautiful and romantic. I like how you compared love to a beautiful sunrise. Nice rhymes , content and imagery. Well done:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/24/2017 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Alexis, I'm glad you liked it. I also wrote several other poems comparing love to the seashore, rain, and the mountains which are all very similar. I guess I was feeling particularly romantic at the time... :)
Date: 10/23/2017 6:59:00 PM
absolutely beautiful John this is so uplifting the imagery is gorgeous:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Jan, always appreciate your comments. John
Date: 10/22/2017 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful inspirational nature write John!~Che :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Cheryl and thank you for your visit. John
Date: 10/22/2017 10:10:00 PM
It sounds like a very beautiful song ! I enjoyed reading your work today and I hope to return back again..cheers !
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2017 10:31:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Red, I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed my writing!
Date: 10/22/2017 7:36:00 PM
So lovely...romantic!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, glad you enjoyed it!

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