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Essence of Love

essence of love a vine of jasmine that enchants with its sweet fragrance wrapping curling its tendrils nurturing flourish beauty holding each other our own little universe communicating in a language all our own burning one unified flame 1/3/2018

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Date: 1/10/2018 7:02:00 PM
Eve,This verse instills the presents with its words. I can feel and sense as though I am in A garden, very lovely, so sweet and nice WRITE ONE James
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Date: 1/4/2018 3:29:00 PM
'Burning one unified flame' this is really beautiful Eve! Very lovely Tanka! : )
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Date: 1/4/2018 10:10:00 AM
the first tanks is brilliant, I like the second line.... You did a great entry for this contest... Good luck..
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Date: 1/4/2018 9:29:00 AM
This is just beautiful, Eve. A wonderful metaphor for love. Good Luck !!
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Date: 1/4/2018 7:38:00 AM
Very nicely written Eve. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:44:00 AM
a beautiful description of love becoming so unified, Eve.
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Date: 1/3/2018 11:18:00 PM
Gorgeous! <3
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