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Love and Pain, Vampire, Edvard Munch

I hold you ~
in wine rose reveries
        in every waking sigh
amidst the cruel
     cadmium coldness
peeling away the paradox
of veiled vulnerability
like wordless fervor 
where the medieval marbles
of your molten metal aura
reside close to
the vermilion vibratos
of my violin heart
for the voice of this ache
skips an octave above
the hypnagogic heaviness
of our hushed haven,
illustrated 
with bloodstone indigo
as the epitome of
love and pain… air and ash 
      salt and rain
without an 
     intrusive interruption 

you are tamed 
     to the vampire veins
      dressed in the
deepest tales of darkness
a divine devotee to
my addictive despair
where scarlet scriptures
of wildflower flames
taste the aurora tears
echoing through
centuries of archaic odes
still entranced and entrapped
like twin-fires healing
through the 
      feverish heat of hurt....

O beloved calligrapher
of my eclipsed sky ~
fear not the fickleness
of fleeting nights...
we are the purity 
that passing moons
         shall never fathom 

never would we be cast ablaze
we remain
    engrossed in the essence
of earth-soaked soil ~
fragranced
    with frankincense faith…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:35 PM
this is beautiful, Ink. I love the painting, your sensitivity amazes me sometimes
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 3:08 AM
I hate missing your poems, especially when you get top-notch in your contests. Wonderful poem.
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 5:22 PM
Back with my congrats on your podium win, Sweetie
Empress Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 7:45 PM
Awwn thank you sweet Andrea ~ grateful! I need to read yours for this contest too, gosh I have been so busy ~ I ddnt get to read the amazing winners :O
Croft Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 12:29 AM
very very beautiful, congrats on your placement
Empress Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 7:45 PM
Thank you beautiful soul karen. Always appreciate you
Kerr Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 10:49 PM
Congratulations Ink Empress on your podium triumph. A magnum opus of the most magnificent kind. Howard
Empress Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 7:45 PM
Thank you dear Howard, good to see you after a long time ~ sending you light always
George Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 5:25 AM
"O beloved calligrapher of my eclipsed sky ~" I believe, that the said Calligrapher has been so beloved to you once, but now with the twist of fate, gone out of touch, but never out of mind, leaving your sky eclipsed. "still entranced and entrapped like twin-fires healing through the feverish heat of hurt...".These lines echo a long story of blistering hurt and betrayal. Only you can come up with such intriguing lines, penetrating so deep into one's emotions. Wonderful Ekphrasis.
Empress Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 7:46 PM
The calligrapher is so in touch with my soul and heart still dear sweet valsa. I am so grateful whenver you comment ~ cus I can see you take time to absorb emotions. Sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 5:46 AM
Another brilliant interpretation IE, I wouldn't know where to start. Your talent for getting into the heart and soul can't be matched. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 3:54 AM
Thank you so much dear TomC, I would love to read an ekphrasis from you. I appreciate your kindness always truly. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:50 PM
‘we are the purity that passing moons shall never fathom’… are relationships bound by the number of moons that pass? Who knows these things? Your poem was intriguing as always. Enjoyable to read.
Empress Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 1:36 AM
Lord knows, relationships can be a mystery ~ but I surely have a book of rules for love and relationships. Hah its private tho. Thank you dear Robert. Sending you light always
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:21 PM
the hypnagogic heaviness of our hushed haven… where scarlet scriptures of wildflower flames taste the aurora tears… in wine rose reveries… a few of the highlights that I love. Nicely done, Ink!
Empress Avatar
June 21, 2026 at 1:31 AM
Thank you so very much dear Kim, I am touched by your kindness. Sending you light always ~
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:31 PM
should I bow to the essence of your poetic powers or bathe my heart and mind in the ambiance of your descriptive words that lead me on a journey of romantic intrigue where the heart becomes a tangle of emotional reasoning shape by your verse of poetry, I believe I'll inhale its breath-taking vision of belief and faith in love...Frederic
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:07 PM
Thank you dear Frederic. Appreciate your generous praise...Sending you light always ~
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 2:03 PM
This one just got better and better, Ink. I loved those last two stanzas where you personalize with oh beloved calligrapher. As always you reign supreme in alliterative descriptions!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 9:05 PM
Awwn thank you sweet soul aunt. I appreciate you always supporting me and being kind about my poetry. Sending you light always
Bordner Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:26 AM
"remain close to the vermillion vibratos of my violin heart..." that's Nice! Poetess...the sense of Nurture in this fine poem is very beautiful...the tempo of feeling and thought is carried perfectly to It's conclusion...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:30 AM
Thank you dear Justin, thats exactly what I thought of " nurture" wow, you always feel the essence of my poems. Thats truly an honor! I am sincerely grateful for your support: sending you light today and always
DiMino Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 10:54 AM
"for the voice of this ache skips an octave above the hypnagogic heaviness" -- love that! Very original! "a divine devotee to my addictive despair where scarlet scriptures of wildflower flames" -- Wonderful imagery. Fiery. Electric. Very original, unique use of emotive language. Great write my friend. Enjoyed!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Aww thank you so much dear Joe. I am do grateful always for your kind and sincere support! I have been wanting to write on this artpiece for a bit now. So finally did ~ sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 10:50 AM
peeling away the paradox of veiled vulnerability… somthng abt it sooo sexaaaay papi!!!! U out here peeling my heart piece by piece !!! your molten metal aura reside close to the vermilion vibratos of my violin heart for the voice of this ache skips an octave above… you and you alone make me skip n octave!!! Somtimes I be in a bathroom doin opera out of that …! divine devotee to my addictive despair… that is very true my child !!!!! Addictive u r!!!! O beloved calligrapher of my eclipsed sky… damn the way u calling for me um like ok lemme dismember my clothes n come immediately!! we are the purity that passing moons shall never fathom … yes yeeeees!!! Sometimes even I can’t fathom me !! This piece is an intoxicatingly sexaaaay piece papi!!!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:28 AM
Lolol maria! *rolling rolling * hahaha
Onpaper Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Ooo u wud like here ????. Lemme start here ….. ok u listen aee … aaaaaaaaaaaaaveeeeeeee marrrriiiiiiiiiaaaa!!!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:24 AM
Lololil you are so hilarious! I would like to hear your opera! :,) haha
Onpaper Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:21 AM
Why can’t u!!!! You must!!!!!! Y O U M U S T!!!!!!!!! I’ll collapse!!!!
Empress Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Hahhaahahah papi i cant even
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