Love and Pain

Love can be lost Love can be blind, Pain will remain With those left behind.

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Date: 9/7/2021 3:22:00 PM

Very true Simon, can't seem to have one without the other usually. Emilia : )

Date: 11/15/2020 6:08:00 PM

Packs a punch, Simon... How I like 'em: Succinct! Write on, please. Best wishes, Gershon

Simon Hamill
Date: 11/15/2020 7:28:00 PM

Thank you.i'd never heard of a quatrain before.im new,and learning lots from all you great poets.i love being on here..cheers, Simon

Date: 11/13/2020 5:44:00 PM

sweet and bittersweet. I love a poem like this.

Simon Hamill
Date: 11/13/2020 6:27:00 PM

Thank you.im new to all this.still trying to work out all different types of poems.take care.simon:)

Date: 11/12/2020 6:37:00 PM

Yep, true! Nice one, Simon :)

Simon Hamill
Date: 11/12/2020 11:46:00 PM

Thank you.take care.simon