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Love and Commitment


True love is a vast ocean…
Calms and churns with highs and lows
Shaped by ever-changing tides…
Staunched by commitment.

Commitment is a vast sky
Bright with sun or dull with rain,
Rainbow arcs or thick gray clouds…
Balanced by true love.


February 5, 2015

Premiere Contest: What I Love 
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

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Date: 2/5/2015 5:22:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, Sandra. I'm quite partial to the ocean and loved this one!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. So nice of your to stop by with your nice comment. Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 3:52:00 PM
Beautiful indeed...best of luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you once again, M.L. I appreciate your comments and support. Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 3:18:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments, Sandra! True love does get us through those cloudy days...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhonda, for your nice comments and good wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 9:58:00 AM
simply stunning imagery of love and commitment - living on the Island the comparison of love to the sea is superb - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:28:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for stopping by with your much appreciated positive comments and support. Hugs, Sandra