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Love and Commitment

True love is a vast ocean… Calms and churns with highs and lows Shaped by ever-changing tides… Staunched by commitment. Commitment is a vast sky Bright with sun or dull with rain, Rainbow arcs or thick gray clouds… Balanced by true love. February 5, 2015 ~2nd Place~ Contest: The Meaning Of Love Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Judged: 08/27/2022

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Date: 8/29/2022 1:19:00 PM
So well penned and conceived. You link both stanzas seamlessly in a flow that supports the sentiments expressed in each. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 8/27/2022 7:41:00 PM
Your words capture the fragility of love Sandra, and the strength tendered by commitment. In just a few words you have it all in a nutshell. Beautifully expressed Sandra! Congratulations on your Second Place win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/5/2015 5:22:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, Sandra. I'm quite partial to the ocean and loved this one!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. So nice of your to stop by with your nice comment. Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 3:52:00 PM
Beautiful indeed...best of luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you once again, M.L. I appreciate your comments and support. Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 3:18:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments, Sandra! True love does get us through those cloudy days...best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhonda, for your nice comments and good wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/5/2015 9:58:00 AM
simply stunning imagery of love and commitment - living on the Island the comparison of love to the sea is superb - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/5/2015 8:28:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for stopping by with your much appreciated positive comments and support. Hugs, Sandra

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