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Love Amongst the Stars

It is not easy for me, To utter sweet and honeyed words, That you expect to hear Each and every lively moment Of our long-lasting existence. And yet as we both roam, Amongst the darkling void Of space alight by million stars, From nebulous clusters of rocky meteors To hazy rings that circle unknown planets, Kissing and hugging Hurting and loving, Sharing and cherishing Eons of wonderful love, You know that our feelings Will never die, Until …. Some unexpected nova kills us all, And then We’ll become one.

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:39:00 AM
wow, what an amazing poem this is. I searched a whole minute trying to find one I had not seen yet and this is what I landed on!
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Date: 12/22/2022 11:28:00 PM
Unique thoughts here, Victor:)
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Date: 12/21/2022 4:01:00 AM
Interesting write, my friend!
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Date: 12/20/2022 4:14:00 AM
A great write my friend. Who knows what will happen to Planet Earth one day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/20/2022 3:15:00 AM
Honest. Earth life is challenging and love alone is real. Enjoyed your poem
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Date: 12/19/2022 6:03:00 AM
Victor, you bring us a tour of the heavens…where, it is said, each star holds the heart’s love of a saint. In this poem you gift us with a real sense of that eternal love, which we too may know. An exquisite piece! Bravo! xoxo. sally
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Date: 12/17/2022 2:46:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Victor, when you look up at the stars above, the brightest star is sending her love… Belle
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Date: 12/17/2022 1:52:00 AM
Love the tender presentation, and even the cataclysmic ending shows faith in love immortal. Faith in God. Beautiful writing!
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Date: 12/16/2022 7:59:00 PM
Roaming through the firmament among the astral formations, loving and holding hands is indeed a celestial experience. Lovely penning Victor!
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Date: 12/16/2022 5:50:00 PM
In the cosmos with love, a new concept, Victor how is your molar doing?
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Buhagiar Victor
Date: 12/16/2022 10:25:00 PM
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Date: 12/16/2022 4:57:00 PM
Romance played out upon the cosmic stage is even more beautiful, Victor. A nice one!
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Date: 12/16/2022 10:43:00 AM
Love knows no bounds, to infinity and beyond, love conquers all. Tom
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Date: 12/16/2022 7:20:00 AM
A walk among the stars , two lovers to the end. Blessings my friend
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Date: 12/16/2022 6:38:00 AM
To fulfill the wishes of the hearts, there is love to be found amid the stars. Victor, that was a beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/16/2022 6:03:00 AM
Just like the hearts ordered--love amongst the stars. Lovely poem, Victor.
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Date: 12/16/2022 4:56:00 AM
Victor you write love poems so beautifully. You capture a time when love was at it heights, and place it into your poem for us all to share, Thank you Victor.
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Date: 12/16/2022 3:53:00 AM
- True love conquers all, Victor - hugs
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