Love Amongst the Stars

It is not easy for me,
To utter sweet and honeyed words,
That you expect to hear
Each and every lively moment
Of our long-lasting existence.
And yet as we both roam,
Amongst the darkling void
Of space alight by million stars,
From nebulous clusters of rocky meteors
To hazy rings that circle unknown planets,
Kissing and hugging
Hurting and loving,
Sharing and cherishing
Eons of wonderful love,
You know that our feelings
Will never die,
Until ….
Some unexpected nova kills us all,
And then
We’ll become one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 10:39 AM
wow, what an amazing poem this is. I searched a whole minute trying to find one I had not seen yet and this is what I landed on!
Daniel Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 11:28 PM
Unique thoughts here, Victor:)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 4:01 AM
Interesting write, my friend!
Proxenos Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 4:14 AM
A great write my friend. Who knows what will happen to Planet Earth one day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Seeker Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 3:15 AM
Honest. Earth life is challenging and love alone is real. Enjoyed your poem
Eslinger Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Victor, you bring us a tour of the heavens…where, it is said, each star holds the heart’s love of a saint. In this poem you gift us with a real sense of that eternal love, which we too may know. An exquisite piece! Bravo! xoxo. sally
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December 17, 2022 at 2:46 AM
Beautiful poetry Victor, when you look up at the stars above, the brightest star is sending her love… Belle
DiMino Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 1:52 AM
Love the tender presentation, and even the cataclysmic ending shows faith in love immortal. Faith in God. Beautiful writing!
George Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 7:59 PM
Roaming through the firmament among the astral formations, loving and holding hands is indeed a celestial experience. Lovely penning Victor!
Anaya Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 5:50 PM
In the cosmos with love, a new concept, Victor how is your molar doing?
Buhagiar Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 10:25 PM
bad
Buehler Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Romance played out upon the cosmic stage is even more beautiful, Victor. A nice one!
Cunningham Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Love knows no bounds, to infinity and beyond, love conquers all. Tom
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 7:20 AM
A walk among the stars , two lovers to the end. Blessings my friend
Poet Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 6:38 AM
To fulfill the wishes of the hearts, there is love to be found amid the stars. Victor, that was a beautiful poem.
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Just like the hearts ordered--love amongst the stars. Lovely poem, Victor.
Volumes Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 4:56 AM
Victor you write love poems so beautifully. You capture a time when love was at it heights, and place it into your poem for us all to share, Thank you Victor.
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 3:53 AM
- True love conquers all, Victor - hugs
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