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Love: a Gift That Keeps Giving

Love is something that everyone needs Whether you have joy or your heart bleeds Love is the key to a better life It will keep you from envy and strife Love is needed in this world today Evil and violence has led us astray Love is a light in a dark place Something everyone will soon face Love is your gift to give So give it and let someone live So many people die of broken hearts Because those they loved depart So give this gift to those in sight So that they see their path is right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/9/2010 2:29:00 PM
I like the flow of this poem. It could actually be classified as a sonnet. It has 14 lines and an ending rhyming couplet. The rhyming pattern certainly flows in a consistent manner. I like the essence of the piece and the message it sends. Welcome to Poetry Soup and great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:41:00 AM
such a sweet and loving write..P.D.
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