Love : a Letter of Intent

LOVE I start licking YOUR warmth YOUR taste tingles my tongue YOUR satisfaction has begun How could I call myself a man ; If I can not satisfy YOUR desires Entwined in LOVE Lost in lust Together we dance in the solitude of True Sexuality I enter gently the moisture of YOUR LOVE Enveloped in the rhythm of A Heavenly Song YOUR eyes whisper I LOVE YOU I pledge Forever with my eyes The crescendo of our Loving peaks to climax The bliss of ****** complete My Heart and Soul request REPEAT Dedicated To My LOVE Barbara Jean Gorelick Author's note : I Apologize if this POEM offends any of my Family POETS

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/25/2012 9:23:00 PM

Very romantic and passionate. (: I love the line "The crescendo of our loving peaks to climax" . Interesting and well put. Always, Laura

Patricia Prescott

Date: 7/6/2009 2:04:00 AM

Surely anyone who is blessed to experience such passion as you have written about will not be offended....beautiful, simply beautiful....Patty

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/23/2009 3:05:00 PM

Intense!!

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/23/2009 3:04:00 PM

Wow I love this! Incredible write mon ami!

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 9:29:00 AM

Love has no private moments ... its a light that cannot be hid ... blazing.

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/17/2009 8:50:00 PM

Love your heart and passion with this spicy piece. Well done. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/17/2009 6:30:00 AM

Yikes! The soup sure is sizzling as of late! My goodness, this is completely piping hot stuff! Tastefully done as only your heart will allow! Quite a passionate dedication! Wow! Love, Shar