Love

Love Do you believe? You deserve to be loved Do you believe? It’s about give and take In, and of itself Deserve; is a selfish word And no one ‘deserves’ to be loved But, to give Unconditionally You Deserve To Love Another And with truth May you reap in all you sow © 2017 Jeffrey Spencer

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/27/2017 3:11:00 PM

Jeffrey I do believe in love. yes it is about give and take. I like your poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2017 9:27:00 AM

Now I understand your views on this poem. it makes sense to me. have a nice day my friend.

Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 11/28/2017 5:12:00 AM

Hi Darlene, I also believe in love, very much! My attempt here is to examine the root of ones love. Do I love thy .... because, or Do I love thy.... 'just' because! To love without expectation is true love. Therefore, the GIVE outweighs the TAKE! Thank You for stopping by and your comment. Have a great day! J

Jeffrey Spencer
Date: 11/28/2017 5:12:00 AM