Love

Love is the sweet scent of comfort knowing you're only one heartbeat away.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2016 8:55:00 PM

this was so nice. I'd have put it higher!! Congrats, Tim.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2016 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful love one line hugs Eve

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/9/2016 3:31:00 PM

love is the warm happiness and joy that sings to the heart always beautifully painted pal

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:06:00 PM

Thank you Liam

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/9/2016 2:56:00 PM

Hi Tim, This is so beautiful. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:05:00 PM

Thanks again Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2016 1:18:00 PM

Truly beautiful, Tim....one heartbeat away...love awaits!! Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Paul

Joseph May

Date: 10/9/2016 12:17:00 PM

Nice write and win...Congrats

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Joseph

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/9/2016 8:25:00 AM

Beautifully expressed my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:04:00 PM

Thanks DT

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/9/2016 7:31:00 AM

Kinda like being a VP, good luck in the contest Tim...

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:04:00 PM

Haha..Thanks Charlie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/9/2016 4:31:00 AM

ohh my, when it comes to love and sweet ardor, you always make me swoon, tim... huggs

Nette Onclaud
Date: 10/10/2016 4:38:00 PM

and now, for the big congrats, tim!..huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:01:00 PM

Thanks so much nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 7:25:00 PM

ahhh, it's super sweet and I really like it, Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:00:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2016 6:12:00 PM

Tim hello, this is a delightful poem I just finished reading.I read it twice. I enjoyed it.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 7:00:00 PM

Twice...why thank you Darlene

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2016 5:52:00 PM

I commented on this delightful poem earlier Tim - looks like the gremlin is about again - it happened on another poem the other day:-) lol the captcha is 'dum' - maybe I never posted the comment in the first place ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 6:59:00 PM

LOL..It happens or we hit the wrong captcha and dont realise it wasnt sent

Sherri Whiteford

Date: 10/8/2016 5:17:00 PM

This definitely looks and reads like a real winner in my eyes. I also agree with what Alexis has said below. Best of luck in contest Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thanks Sherri

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/8/2016 5:16:00 PM

You made splendid use of your one line Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thanks Rick

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/8/2016 5:01:00 PM

Hi Tim, Exceptional one liner about love. I wish you the best luck in the contest: -) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Alexis

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/8/2016 4:51:00 PM

Very comforting and beautiful.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/9/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thanks Charma. Giving comfort to one another is a big key to love.