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Love

LOVE COMES AND LOVE GOES AWAY, MY TRUE LOVE CAME JUST THE OTHER DAY. THE WORDS HE SPOKE WAS VERY SWEET. THEY TOUCH ME IN MY HEART AN SWEPT ME OFF MY FEET. THEY SAY LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT IS JUST A LIE BUT, ONE LOOK AT YOU AND I KNOW THEY WILL CHANGE THEY'RE MIND. I NEVER TOLD A PROMISE I CAN'T KEEP. I PROMISE AND HOPE U WILL FOR EVER HAVE ME.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 12:43:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your work. So feed me
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:28:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. I also just posted a poem about LUV today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sharon. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. On your next to last stanza I think you mean bullcrap right? Love, Carol
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