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May.1.2024

Sonnet Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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"One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life. The word is love." Sophocles, Greek Poet Love is a sparkling flame that guides and leads Lending a divine spark to all our deeds It is a force that enlivens the world A spirit that makes hearts joyous and glad In our firmament, love is a bright star Its laser beams erase all gloom and scar It dispels darkness and cleanses the dirt Kindling the soul and healing every hurt It's like a forceful tide that calms the storm To make life joyful, love is the sole norm. Love is the power that rules every heart Imparts all our endeavors a kick start It's a burning lamp that shall ever shine With love’s strong thread, let every heart entwine

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Constance La France

Date: 5/12/2024 3:08:00 PM

Valsa, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2024 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2024 7:07:00 PM

Love is indeed the divine spark to our needs and heals the soul, so uplifting and touching, best of luck in the contest~

Tonye George

Date: 5/4/2024 6:18:00 AM

Love is so many things but steady. Loved how you portrayed love. We all want that real peaceful love but I feel people are too wounded to even try to give it. "It's a burning lamp that shall ever shine With love’s strong thread, let every heart entwine." On beautiful days, it is. Cheers V.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2024 4:34:00 PM

Very well done. I know many are not following her rules. But I think you got it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2024 4:34:00 PM

Very well done. I know many are not following her rules. But I think you got it!

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/3/2024 10:03:00 AM

Such a wonderful, inspiring sonnet dear Valsa. I love the quote too. So many exquisite lines here beautifully expressed. ‘It’s a burning lamp that shall ever shine’. Love the imagery. Really enjoyed it as I always do with all your wonderful poems. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings :)

Jay Narain

Date: 5/2/2024 10:09:00 AM

Nice sonnet. Love is inspiring as well as guiding force in our lives.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/2/2024 3:25:00 AM

Sweet Valsa, as sweet as your great poem. Full of positive vibes, it goes to the heart. A lesson for all sinners. And my heartfelt wishes for a high placement.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/1/2024 4:07:00 PM

Dear Valsa, Your sonnet reminds us the presence of love as an inspiring force. "It's like a forceful tide that calms the storm..." - captivating imagery, as all the images are! Best wishes ~

Silent One

Date: 5/1/2024 12:51:00 PM

Your sonnet beautifully captures the essence of love as a transformative and guiding force in our lives. The imagery of love as a sparkling flame and a bright star conveys its luminous and powerful nature, illuminating our existence and driving out darkness and despair. It depicts love as a source of joy and healing, capable of soothing the soul and overcoming adversity.

Jay Narain

Date: 5/1/2024 10:48:00 AM

Loving poem with heartfelt vibes.

Stephan McBride

Date: 5/1/2024 8:24:00 AM

Beautiful, this Love and Spirit you have flowing throughout you is a sparkling divine flame : )

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/1/2024 7:02:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, I just loved how your words beautifully capture its transformative power and enduring presence in our lives. Like a guiding flame, love enriches our existence and infuses every deed with meaning. Your verses illuminate the essence of love as a force that brings joy, healing, and unity to our souls. What a heartfelt expression of the profound impact of love. - Blessings, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2024 6:44:00 AM

Wonderful poetry on the significance and strength of love dear Valsa. It highlights the power of love to save, restore, and delight people, while also triumphing against adversity. You did an excellent job of describing love and all the ways it shapes and improves our lives. It exemplifies the power of love to illuminate, delight, and fulfill, eventually bringing people together and promoting optimism. Your use of language was moving and evocative, painting a picture of love as a changing power.