Love

~Love~ Love, like the fragile rose, with fire embrace me As your cherished prize winning bloom Trace your fingertips along my bursting seeds Rejoice - your plan born from your fertile womb. 9-22-20 Original Poem: Love, Like a Rose Contest Name: Rithimus Divisa 7

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John Watt

Date: 9/22/2020 1:54:00 PM

Excellent choice for your entry, Sam. So much to love in these four lines. Love the original sonnet, too! Blessings ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2020 2:03:00 PM

Hi John. Thank you. It is an interesting exercise to pull lines from a poem and see how they stand on their own as a new write! So happy your liked this and the original - kind of like watching the Pads clinch a post season spot! Really happy for SD! Sending bunches of blessings!