Love 1-Beginning, Love 2-Being, Love 3-Ending

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Love 1-Beginning soft fluffy pillows of warmth filling the hollow emptiness illuminating the darkness in my soul ever present before I met you Love 2-Being with sweet gentle fingers I trace your wilting brow how longingly they linger my affection I avow Love 3-Ending cloudy images of darkness like twilight in my brain sadness comes to all my love yet hearts so open forever know soft fluffy pillows always remain What Is a Randomling? Contest-NA Mary Oliver Rotman 9/8/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 8:41:00 PM

this is very thoughtful and beautiful poetry. I hope you get a win. You would deserve it. That quadruple of mine, I just know I posted it, but I could never find it in my index here. I must have given it a different title from what is in my files. DANG.

James Inman
Date: 8/12/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you for the comment. I didn't realize until today that you can sort poems by form. I read a few of your etherees today but you have more etherees then I have poems. I' d love to comment on all of them because they are all great, but not enough time. Thanks again, Andrea.

April Walter Skyy

Date: 8/12/2015 11:32:00 AM

That is very pretty. I can understand from the beginning of a love, then it starts to fade, then it's a love lost. I hope you will stop by and take a look at some of my writing.