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Love -N- the Lottery

Rick held a winning ticket and a flame

He said, “Dear, I love you more than this claim!”

Just before he set fire

She charged with a live wire

And soon a wealthy widow she became

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 5:33:00 PM

I'm still waiting on that car.. love it..pd

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/17/2012 5:33:00 AM

You don't CARE ANYTHING about money, do you , Nat? ha ha...I loved this entry from day one...you have a twisted way of displaying your affection in this fantastic limerick!! Just smashing...(I have coffee in hand...the lids are opening...). Off to find another one of yours....

Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 7:52:00 PM

Congrats, Natalie. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/16/2012 3:07:00 PM

Good one, Natalie! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/16/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2012 5:44:00 AM

wise woman and a fun limerick, nat.. super congrats on the great win! :) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2012 1:48:00 AM

Natalie congrats on your win, oohh that'll hurt..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 4:14:00 PM

YOurs was so great, Natalie. Congrats on your win.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/15/2012 2:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Natalie. Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2012 12:42:00 PM

congrats Natalie on a great win for these winning lines of lottery Limerick luv..

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/11/2012 6:16:00 PM

Now that's a sudden jolt !! lol laughing here...hope I didn't wake Dad !! lol Excellent limerick !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2012 5:33:00 PM

hahaha, your comment about star trek made me laugh. WEll, I think viewing earth before coming here must have been a bit like Star Trek. I believe we all have the ability to simply "think" of where we want to go and we will be there (something we surely will relearn upon our return home). It's the only explanation for how God is able to be so many places and his angels too!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2012 5:29:00 AM

Pleasant and a smile poem Natalie,perfect. Thank you for reeding my poem.oxox love from Anne-Lise

Lisa Cooper

Date: 1/10/2012 1:16:00 PM

remind me not to rate your poetry low lol I wouldn't want to get a live wire lol great pen! love and light!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 11:22:00 AM

TDZZZZZ....I can hear the flesh burning now!! The lucky widow!! A great entry too!! You and I oughtta go into business marrying these lottery men and then start a detective agency trying to figure out how they all disappeared!!! ha ha. Happy Day, Nat. Gwendolen