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Love-Like-Water

A love like water. so soft, so fragile, as it flows and bends, leaving gentle kisses, a giver of life. A love like water. a love so strong, so powerful, as it destroys obstacles, breaking walls, to shape a path, a future. A love that drowns oceans, a love so real, like the drops of water upon my arms, seeping into my hair, glistening across my skin, a love that drowns oceans, a love that suffocates my soul, a love so intoxicating, so overwhelming, a love filling my lungs, and right when it's almost too much, a love like water. Ever flowing, everbending, everchanging, a love, like water.

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Date: 4/28/2024 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Thx for supporting the contest
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Date: 4/28/2024 8:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/28/2024 4:35:00 AM
I never looked at it like this before. Nicely written.
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