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Once ...
Yes, once, but not now ...
I am not IN the world anymore -
so far gone, is that state of quixotic and callow carelessness ...
not the age, not the cluster-freak of hormones,
but the crystallic condition of constant, total amazement
that shot through my neurons like sal volatile.
Three lifetimes away, it waves at me,
across a bog of black, boiling bitterness and escape.
I am an eel in a condom, slipping through a murk of subsistence,
without a passion or pain or pounded fist ...
praying to god-like phantoms,
screaming my lungs in utter silence,
for one precious moment
of real life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/14/2019 7:48:00 AM
Some very interesting metaphors in this dark write, you know I'm not a fan of these writes but I can see the quality of the write and the pain that lies within, sal volatile eh, you always have a freshness when you use different expressions like that, great write although mildly disturbing!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Brother ... blessings.
Date: 10/14/2019 7:35:00 AM
Wow! An eel in a condom...the imagery! If you are suffering, I pray peace over you, my dear friend! ...Kim
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim, that is very kind. <3
Date: 10/14/2019 4:40:00 AM
Jesus is the real life you seek, I believe. I will pray for you and your poetry is always amazing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/4/2020 6:10:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness, Regina - blessings! <3
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