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Lost Valentine

“She was mine” was all he thought His spark was gone, forever had seemed so long The gleam in his eye, dulled as days went by He’d been trying hard to carry on, she was two months gone He could no longer cry, all life was now, was a lie His sadness growing deeper, as the world continued to fly by His girl was gone now, his reason and purpose no longer around For years he cared, he couldn’t show, but those actions spoke louder than any words she would’ve known His poor tired soul began to appear on his face His heart numb from losing the one love that who with, his life had begun Now it was his time to start, for in his heart, he knew…… They wouldn’t be far apart. Dedicated to the memory of my Grandparents William Lee Neeland Sr. 02/22/27 – 07/10/04 Pauline Sue Neeland 07/27/46 - 12/24/03 with all my love, #2

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Date: 7/10/2016 11:18:00 PM
TONYA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:53:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tonya :) - I choose your first well and moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:41:00 PM
Tonya, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2014 6:59:00 AM
Tonya ,a nice poem.a warm welcome to soup family . Hope u will get a lot of amusement and motivation here. Tell me about urself in a soup mail. Hope u will like our family which u too are a part of now.keep reading and writing .feel free to comment on my writes. Best wishes -shaista:)
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:42:00 AM
Tonya,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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