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Lost To the Wind

I saw you first when summer had its end. So beautiful you were – a dream come true. I hardly could believe that God would send to me an angel; yet he sent me you! And like a leaf, into my life you blew. A leaf of early fall, your hue was gold. Our tale began . . . but it did not unfold, for by October’s end, you’d sailed away - lost to the wind! Now that we’ve both grown old - I wonder . . . are you golden still today? Aug. 8, 2020 inspired by Edward Ibeh's current "Pick-A-Title, Vol 21 - Dizain -" Poetry Contest Title chosen: Lost To The wind

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Date: 8/26/2020 11:13:00 PM
Most of your musings sync with the similar theme Andrea mam.. It sounds delightful ...to me:-) Even I am eager to know...did you find him?? Anyways... Congratulations on your win.Wish it could have been placed higher.. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love ..:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 11:53:00 AM
Oh..Andrea mam..Thankyou for spending a minute to share your past with me..:-) I was very curious to know..about it. Now.. you have given me an explanation ..i am satisfied, though not happy.I feel sad to hear you missed him.I wish you to meet him one day and become good friends :-) But...nice to see you recalling him often & using as an inspiration in your romantic musings:-) My best wishes to you..You are a sweet strong woman.Take care.Much love sent to you..!! Mam..In future ..if you find him..please let me know.I would celebrate victory with you.:-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/27/2020 9:07:00 AM
I see you noticed that. I got to know him only a very short while. Maybe we never would have worked out, but I felt a very deep connection and when he tried to find me again, I had gotten married by then. Today I cannot find him on FB or anything. I used this person to inspire many of my romantic poems!
Date: 8/19/2020 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful dizain poem, Andrea:-) Loved the concluding line!
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Date: 8/13/2020 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations, this is a beautiful dizain pair.
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Date: 8/13/2020 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on our win. "Beautiful" One day I will have a pen like you have. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/13/2020 4:30:00 PM
thanks, you are too kind.
Date: 8/13/2020 10:04:00 AM
Wow, this is simply beautiful, Andrea, one of the best Dizains I've seen. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/10/2020 9:30:00 AM
You are so good at this kind of write, Andrea. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Date: 8/9/2020 4:29:00 AM
I really like this one. Very expressive and creative and lesson oriented. Sara
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:05:00 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so prettily penned!
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:04:00 PM
Nicely written Andrea. Luv Michael
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Date: 8/8/2020 5:04:00 PM
Wow... Nicely penned. Good luck
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Date: 8/8/2020 1:34:00 PM
He is probably a silver fox now Andrea, a delightful disdain, hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2020 1:42:00 PM
I think I would be afraid to find out. I have seen so many gorgeous men end up looking simply horrid even before they reach 50!!! Vanity thy name must surely be woman! (actually, some guys stay so great looking without even trying!)
Date: 8/8/2020 12:45:00 PM
We often wonder about past loves in our lives, how their lives turned out etc. Of course a reunion for old times sakes is out of the question. Good luck in the contest, hope you're weekend going well. Tom
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Date: 8/8/2020 12:36:00 PM
Hello Andrea, a beautiful poem. So is he golden today? Nicely done. Hugs Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2020 9:41:00 AM
Oh I see.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2020 1:33:00 PM
I wish to heck I knew. Can't even track him on FB.

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